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Mar 09, 2008 12:48 | #1

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Mar 09, 2008 22:39 | #2

In #1 cropping out that black thing in the left frame would help keep the eye inside the frame.

In #2 the composition seems too centered.

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Mar 09, 2008 22:41 | #3

1. Looks great love the color. Like Robert_Lay said crop out that thing at the left

2. Just looks too busy. And again like what Robert_lay said it is too centered.

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Mar 09, 2008 23:44 as a reply to @ blacktib22590's post | #4

Those are rather shocking images, but I was hoping for a bigger jolt.

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Mar 09, 2008 23:47 | #5

bill boehme wrote in post #5083012

Those are rather shocking images.

Ba-dump-bump!!! Nice one, quite electrifying I would say.

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Mar 10, 2008 03:07 | #6

I really like #1, only thing that buggs me is the hot spot above the box, was your flash pointed here?

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