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Mar 09, 2008 12:48 |  #1

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Mar 09, 2008 22:39 |  #2

In #1 cropping out that black thing in the left frame would help keep the eye inside the frame.

In #2 the composition seems too centered.


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Mar 09, 2008 22:41 |  #3

1. Looks great love the color. Like Robert_Lay said crop out that thing at the left

2. Just looks too busy. And again like what Robert_lay said it is too centered.


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Mar 09, 2008 23:44 as a reply to blacktib22590's post |  #4

Those are rather shocking images, but I was hoping for a bigger jolt.


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Mar 09, 2008 23:47 |  #5

bill boehme wrote in post #5083012external link
Those are rather shocking images.

Ba-dump-bump!!! Nice one, quite electrifying I would say.


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Mar 10, 2008 03:07 |  #6

I really like #1, only thing that buggs me is the hot spot above the box, was your flash pointed here?


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