Save The Date

taygull · 9th of March 2008 (Sun)

I flew to Atlanta last weekend and shot this great couple.

I've changed the files...here is what we decided to go with.

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crackaonrice · 9th of March 2008 (Sun)

They look good. I like the first one better but in both I think you need more separation between the words and the background. More contrast between the letters and background would help. Using a brighter white might work?

Zonieart · 9th of March 2008 (Sun)

I like the layout of number one and the photos in number 2 better. Nice job.

blacktib22590 · 9th of March 2008 (Sun)

they look great!

txt should be more visible in the first one though.

ofdphoto · 9th of March 2008 (Sun)

Take out the kissing shot in #1 and make the text more visible and you have a winner.

The lighting on the swings shot in #2 isn't great, so I wouldn't be using that shot.

HTH.

taygull · 10th of March 2008 (Mon)

Thanks guys.......I do agree on the lighting on the image on the second one.

I put the kissing shot in the first one because they really liked it, I did struggle to find where it looked right.

taygull · 17th of March 2008 (Mon)

I've changed the files...here is what we decided to go with.

Front

Back

ToferPhotography · 18th of March 2008 (Tue)

like the idea, but www.bobandlori2008.com is not loading

taygull · 18th of March 2008 (Tue)

Quote:

Originally Posted by cwescapexlt4x4

like the idea, but www.bobandlori2008.com is not loading

We've not set it up yet...probably in the next couple of weeks.

Ocean Blue · 18th of March 2008 (Tue)

I just don't know about the hands in the back pocket of each others jeans. Seems a little - hmmm - bottom grabby. Hard to pin it down, but are they folks that would do that in pubic... or do it in public and then send a photo to their friends and family? They like it I guess? Could just be me, but my two cents.

9th of March 2008 (Sun)	#3
Zonieart Member Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Tucson Arizona Posts: 591 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: Save The Date I like the layout of number one and the photos in number 2 better. Nice job. __________________ Lots of cameras, lights and lenses. www.jhinklephoto.zenfolio.com www.modelmayhem.com/740591

9th of March 2008 (Sun)	#4
blacktib22590 Member Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: St. Louis, Missouri Posts: 157	Re: Save The Date they look great! txt should be more visible in the first one though. __________________ Canon Rebel XTi Body\|Canon EF-S 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6\| Canon EF 80-200mm f/4.5-5.6 II\| Canon EF 50mm f/1.8 II\| Tamron 75-300mm f/4-5.6 LD Tele/Macro\| Tamron 28-80mm f/3.5-5.6 Aspherical

9th of March 2008 (Sun)	#5
ofdphoto "stupidly long verbal diarrhoea" Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Newcastle, Australia Posts: 4,557	Re: Save The Date Take out the kissing shot in #1 and make the text more visible and you have a winner. The lighting on the swings shot in #2 isn't great, so I wouldn't be using that shot. HTH. __________________ Luke Newcastle headshot photographer \| Twitter \| Facebook \| LinkedIn \| Blog

10th of March 2008 (Mon)	#6
taygull Goldmember Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: McKinney, TX Posts: 3,074 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: Save The Date Thanks guys.......I do agree on the lighting on the image on the second one. I put the kissing shot in the first one because they really liked it, I did struggle to find where it looked right. __________________ http://people.stylecreativephotography.com/ Staff Photographer Frisco STYLE Magazine

17th of March 2008 (Mon)	#7
taygull Goldmember Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: McKinney, TX Posts: 3,074 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: Save The Date I've changed the files...here is what we decided to go with. Front Back __________________ http://people.stylecreativephotography.com/ Staff Photographer Frisco STYLE Magazine Last edited by taygull : 18th of March 2008 (Tue) at 10:26.

9th of March 2008 (Sun)	#1
taygull Goldmember Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: McKinney, TX Posts: 3,074 IMAGE EDITING OK	Save The Date I flew to Atlanta last weekend and shot this great couple. I've changed the files...here is what we decided to go with. Front Back __________________ http://people.stylecreativephotography.com/ Staff Photographer Frisco STYLE Magazine Last edited by taygull : 17th of March 2008 (Mon) at 22:12.

9th of March 2008 (Sun)	#2
crackaonrice Senior Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: San Diego, CA Posts: 1,120 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: Save The Date They look good. I like the first one better but in both I think you need more separation between the words and the background. More contrast between the letters and background would help. Using a brighter white might work? __________________ Why does everybody list their gear here?

18th of March 2008 (Tue)	#8
ToferPhotography Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Litchfield Park, AZ area Posts: 1,025 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: Save The Date like the idea, but www.bobandlori2008.com is not loading __________________ Chris... Aka.."Tofer" ~ Canon EOS 7D 18-135 3.5IS / Canon 50mm 1.8F / Rebel XT (350D) ~ Tamron 17-35mm SP AF 2.8 ~ Sigma 28-300 F3.5-6.3 DG Macro // Canon 75-300 zoom // Canon 430ex // - (Samsung SIII / HTC Thunderbolt/Motorola Droid) - Lowepro Slingpack ==> Facebook[/b]

18th of March 2008 (Tue)	#10
Ocean Blue Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Western New England Posts: 342	Re: Save The Date I just don't know about the hands in the back pocket of each others jeans. Seems a little - hmmm - bottom grabby. Hard to pin it down, but are they folks that would do that in pubic... or do it in public and then send a photo to their friends and family? They like it I guess? Could just be me, but my two cents. __________________ In 1934, Yoshida succeeded in producing a prototype of the first domestically made 35mm focal-plane shutter camera. A believer of the Buddhist faith, he named it "Kwanon" after the Goddess of Mercy, and placed an advertisement for "Kwanon Cameras" in the June 1934 issue of Asahi Camera magazine. - Canon Global History Page - Current Equipment FS items http://photography-on-the.net/forum/....php?t=1228198

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