childrens reading at the LLCC day care

izatt82 · 16th of April 2008 (Wed)

some of the faculty came down and read for the kids, this is for the college newspaper as well. CC welcome

JakubPhoto · 16th of April 2008 (Wed)

The capture here is very snapshot like.

I feel the frame is a tad too busy, without any subject isolation or interesting composition, and I'm all for being "physical" with the camera, but the angle you chose here is awkward to me. Try moving around to find a better perspective, take a couple of shots from different positions and frame your shots better. Look out for details that might really affect the final product, such as a small part of the chair cutting into the frame.

Hope some of this critique helps.

izatt82 · 16th of April 2008 (Wed)

yeah it does, once i got home i knew there might have beem dome better shots. they had him shoved in a corner and the shortest i had was a 24mm kind of tight. i got this one too

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izatt82 Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Springfield,IL Posts: 673	childrens reading at the LLCC day care some of the faculty came down and read for the kids, this is for the college newspaper as well. CC welcome __________________ Chris http://www.izattphotography.com/ http://www.llccveteransclub.org 1D mark II, Canon XTI with 28-135 IS, 100-400mm, manfrotto 681B, Sigma 24-60mm f/2.8, 50 F1.8

16th of April 2008 (Wed)	#2
JakubPhoto Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: NYC Posts: 122	Re: childrens reading at the LLCC day care The capture here is very snapshot like. I feel the frame is a tad too busy, without any subject isolation or interesting composition, and I'm all for being "physical" with the camera, but the angle you chose here is awkward to me. Try moving around to find a better perspective, take a couple of shots from different positions and frame your shots better. Look out for details that might really affect the final product, such as a small part of the chair cutting into the frame. Hope some of this critique helps.

16th of April 2008 (Wed)	#3
izatt82 Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Springfield,IL Posts: 673	Re: childrens reading at the LLCC day care yeah it does, once i got home i knew there might have beem dome better shots. they had him shoved in a corner and the shortest i had was a 24mm kind of tight. i got this one too __________________ Chris http://www.izattphotography.com/ http://www.llccveteransclub.org 1D mark II, Canon XTI with 28-135 IS, 100-400mm, manfrotto 681B, Sigma 24-60mm f/2.8, 50 F1.8

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