Randi and Stephen

LeesaB · 21st of May 2008 (Wed)

Beautiful wedding, rainy day with a few surprises!

LeesaB · 21st of May 2008 (Wed)

two more

LeesaB · 21st of May 2008 (Wed)

last two

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Belmondo · 21st of May 2008 (Wed)

Great stuff!!

The rainbow is really wonderful. I hope it's an omen for the happy couple.

LeesaB · 21st of May 2008 (Wed)

They really thought it was, it was awesome, it was like they were all alone in a crowd!

Thanks Tom!

Kathy H · 21st of May 2008 (Wed)

Nice job Lisa.

The shoe shot is really cute!

A rainbow....how wonderful is that!

You really showed your creative side with these.

kja · 21st of May 2008 (Wed)

Ooo! A rainbow - nice

The shoe shot is just lovely simplicity.

The PP in #3 doesn't really work for me, I like the image, though.

tim1960 · 22nd of May 2008 (Thu)

Here's my take -

#1 - Good shot. Like the rainbow
#2 - Too centered for me. Just looks like shoes on the floor

#3 - Not sure about this one. I'm not fond of the pose; maybe cropped differently and could see tha brides face too would make it a better shot.
#4 - Too blurred for me and don't like the background. Maybe you were going for the blurred look but would like to see faces of at least the bride??
#5 - Good shot. Maybe a bit too centered but I like what you were going for here.
#6 - Looks a little OOF but I like this type of group shot

Again, just my opinion. Keep trying.

LeesaB · 22nd of May 2008 (Thu)

Thanks everyone....Kathy H tells me I should show "sneak" this shot in here, so I am! (she will love that I used her name also)

kvt · 22nd of May 2008 (Thu)

I like that last shot. The sky looks beautiful. Perhaps you could clone out that box on the ground in front of them to make it even better. But nice shot! Is it just me, or what is that funny outline at the top of the treees near the rainbow in the first shot? It makes the background look fake to me...

Belmondo · 22nd of May 2008 (Thu)

Quote:

Originally Posted by Rakefet

Thanks everyone....Kathy H tells me I should show "sneak" this shot in here, so I am! (she will love that I used her name also)

Kathy who?

I see why she liked it. Very nice.

aduda · 22nd of May 2008 (Thu)

I like these. They are very good. The first is my favorite. The trees on the left look a bit over processed or something. And, maybe the bricks on the left could be cropped.

I also really like the one of them dancing in the rain. This is one of those that seems to capture the moment.

The last one are great also. Not crazy about the guys pose, but the composition is nice. Also, that and the one before were shot at ISO 1600. Was that by choice?

shutter_blitz · 22nd of May 2008 (Thu)

The borders of the trees and the building in the first shot, where they meet the sky, look like they were heavily processed, or this a lens/camera problem?

LeesaB · 22nd of May 2008 (Thu)

Quote:

Originally Posted by kvt

I like that last shot. The sky looks beautiful. Perhaps you could clone out that box on the ground in front of them to make it even better. But nice shot! Is it just me, or what is that funny outline at the top of the treees near the rainbow in the first shot? It makes the background look fake to me...

I do see that line...I'll have to check on that.

Thank you!

LeesaB · 22nd of May 2008 (Thu)

Quote:

Originally Posted by aduda

I like these. They are very good. The first is my favorite. The trees on the left look a bit over processed or something. And, maybe the bricks on the left could be cropped.

I also really like the one of them dancing in the rain. This is one of those that seems to capture the moment.

The last one are great also. Not crazy about the guys pose, but the composition is nice. Also, that and the one before were shot at ISO 1600. Was that by choice?

no the ISO was an accident, I had run from inside to out to capture it. I did not have time to think.

thank you!

21st of May 2008 (Wed)	#7
kja Cream of the Crop Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: 40th floor ledge but enjoying the view Posts: 5,903 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: Randi and Stephen Ooo! A rainbow - nice The shoe shot is just lovely simplicity. The PP in #3 doesn't really work for me, I like the image, though. __________________ Kristin Exmouth Western Australia Wedding Photographer Ningaloo Reef Underwater Photographer MY GEAR LIST

22nd of May 2008 (Thu)	#8
tim1960 Member Join Date: May 2006 Location: Hartwell, Georgia Posts: 683 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: Randi and Stephen Here's my take - #1 - Good shot. Like the rainbow #2 - Too centered for me. Just looks like shoes on the floor #3 - Not sure about this one. I'm not fond of the pose; maybe cropped differently and could see tha brides face too would make it a better shot. #4 - Too blurred for me and don't like the background. Maybe you were going for the blurred look but would like to see faces of at least the bride?? #5 - Good shot. Maybe a bit too centered but I like what you were going for here. #6 - Looks a little OOF but I like this type of group shot Again, just my opinion. Keep trying. __________________ T. Gray

22nd of May 2008 (Thu)	#10
kvt Member Join Date: Feb 2008 Posts: 97	Re: Randi and Stephen I like that last shot. The sky looks beautiful. Perhaps you could clone out that box on the ground in front of them to make it even better. But nice shot! Is it just me, or what is that funny outline at the top of the treees near the rainbow in the first shot? It makes the background look fake to me... __________________ KVT Canon EOS 5D, 400D Canon EF 50 f/1.4, Canon EF 85/1.8, Canon EF 100 f/2.8 Macro, Canon EF 135 f/2.0L, Canon EF-S 18-55 f/3.5-5.6 IS, Canon EF 16-35 f/2.8L II, Tamron 28-75 f/2.8, Canon EF 24-105 f/4L IS, Canon EF 70-200 f/4L IS, Canon EF 1.4x II Extender, Canon Speedlite 430EX

22nd of May 2008 (Thu)	#12
aduda Member Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Somewher Under The Sun Posts: 497 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: Randi and Stephen I like these. They are very good. The first is my favorite. The trees on the left look a bit over processed or something. And, maybe the bricks on the left could be cropped. I also really like the one of them dancing in the rain. This is one of those that seems to capture the moment. The last one are great also. Not crazy about the guys pose, but the composition is nice. Also, that and the one before were shot at ISO 1600. Was that by choice? __________________ 7D, 5D,20-35 2.8L, 70-200 2.8L, 50 1.8, 18-135 IS, Sigma 50 1.4, Sigma 105 2.8 macro, SMC Takumar 28 3.5, SMC Takumar 50 1.4, Super-Takumar 105 2.8, Pixel Kings, 430exII, some Vivitar 285's, toys, desire to improve.

22nd of May 2008 (Thu)	#13
shutter_blitz Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 308	Re: Randi and Stephen The borders of the trees and the building in the first shot, where they meet the sky, look like they were heavily processed, or this a lens/camera problem? __________________ Gear: Canon 50D EF 50mm f1.4 USM, EF 70-200mm f/2.8 L IS USM Sunpak 383 Quantaray QSX-9500

21st of May 2008 (Wed)	#4
Belmondo Admin Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: 92210 Posts: 42,710 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: Randi and Stephen Great stuff!! The rainbow is really wonderful. I hope it's an omen for the happy couple. __________________ I'm not short. I'm concentrated awesome!

21st of May 2008 (Wed)	#5
LeesaB "Patience is a what? " Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: It's just St. Louis now! Posts: 14,663 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: Randi and Stephen They really thought it was, it was awesome, it was like they were all alone in a crowd! Thanks Tom! __________________ LeesaB www.LisaNikole.com 365, The project, The commitment

21st of May 2008 (Wed)	#6
Kathy H " it's a very handsome sheep! " Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Western USA Posts: 7,621 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: Randi and Stephen Nice job Lisa. The shoe shot is really cute! A rainbow....how wonderful is that! You really showed your creative side with these. __________________ Kathy H BLOG

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