At the Park

junebug · 29th of September 2008 (Mon)

New lens first shots. Please give me some feedback. 24-105L
Thanks...

KatiaShermanPhotography · 29th of September 2008 (Mon)

PROS:
nice exposure and sharpening!
and most of all VERY cute model you got there =)

CONS:
I would want to see less of background...what F stop did you use? try the lowest oen like F1.8 or at least f4 it will help you seperate your model from background especially when its so busy
Also kinda poor choice of location in many levels: she is sitting right at the adge of teh grass, the banches look kinda like wings on each side of her, and a tree just not doing anything for me. The eye goes stright to teh banch panel that goes through her head.
The pose: maybe tilting her a bit instead of streight to the camera?

FocalPrincess · 29th of September 2008 (Mon)

Quote:

Originally Posted by KatiaShermanPhotography

PROS:
nice exposure and sharpening!
and most of all VERY cute model you got there =)

CONS:
I would want to see less of background...what F stop did you use? try the lowest oen like F1.8 or at least f4 it will help you seperate your model from background especially when its so busy

Unfortunately that lens only goes to f4.

It looks like you'll do very well with your new lens! They sure do give sharp colors, don't they?

29th of September 2008 (Mon)	#2
KatiaShermanPhotography Member Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Springfield, Missouri Posts: 142 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: At the Park PROS: nice exposure and sharpening! and most of all VERY cute model you got there =) CONS: I would want to see less of background...what F stop did you use? try the lowest oen like F1.8 or at least f4 it will help you seperate your model from background especially when its so busy Also kinda poor choice of location in many levels: she is sitting right at the adge of teh grass, the banches look kinda like wings on each side of her, and a tree just not doing anything for me. The eye goes stright to teh banch panel that goes through her head. The pose: maybe tilting her a bit instead of streight to the camera? __________________ www.KatiaShermanPhotography.com Canon 40D Photoshop CS3 3 AlienBees with giant softboxes

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