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Inspired by charlesu - TFP shoot
  I'm posting these for critique. What should I change? Please comment Last edited by DocFrankenstein : 12th of February 2005 (Sat) at 14:42. Reason: Direct paste of pics in the forum |
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Re: Inspired by charlesu - TFP shoot
I like the second one, nice composition and cool expression from the model. Not too fond of the frame however
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Re: Inspired by charlesu - TFP shoot
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You see, it's only interesting if that line is horisontal, because of the converging lines... But if I make the line horizontal, when I crop it, the bricklines get cut out, and without converging lines it no longer seems interesting. So after about 40 mins of experimentation, I ended up just rotating it without cropping. If anyone wants to take a shot at cropping that girl, please go ahead and post what you come up with. Or did you mean the white frame in the first pic? |
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Re: Inspired by charlesu - TFP shoot
Personally I like it the way you did it best, Doc Frankenstein, but here's my attempt at cropping.
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Re: Inspired by charlesu - TFP shoot
God shots Doc. Excellent portrait, and that's my favorite of the two.
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Re: Inspired by charlesu - TFP shoot
rickc: Which one do u mean exactly? First or second?
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