Reluctant Models

poebar · 7th of October 2008 (Tue)

This is my son and his girlfriend. Needless to say I had to weedle them to pose for me, but in the end they both liked this one. I'm still in the learning process so and c&c is welcome.

Thanks for looking

philthejuggler · 7th of October 2008 (Tue)

Nice pose. Colour washed out and possibly has a slight cast, although my laptop screen is not calibrated. Composition poor in my opinion - heads in centre of frame rarely look good - try boosting the saturation slighty and then cropping the image to give a portrait-orientation with the girls eyes about 1/3 of the way up the frame.

audai · 8th of October 2008 (Wed)

very good

fadetoblack22 · 8th of October 2008 (Wed)

Some advice would be to zoom in closer (or step closer) and use a lower f stop to bring them out from the background.

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philthejuggler Goldmember Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Northants, United Kingdom Posts: 2,243 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: Reluctant Models Nice pose. Colour washed out and possibly has a slight cast, although my laptop screen is not calibrated. Composition poor in my opinion - heads in centre of frame rarely look good - try boosting the saturation slighty and then cropping the image to give a portrait-orientation with the girls eyes about 1/3 of the way up the frame. __________________ Blog, Website *1DsIII, 5DII, EOS-M, ZE 18mm f/3.5, 22mm f/2 STM, 24-70mm f/2.8L II, 50mm f/1.2L, 85mm f/1.2L II, ZE 100mm f/2 MP, 135mm f/2L, 200mm f/2.8L, 580EXII x 2***

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audai Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 5	Re: Reluctant Models very good __________________ contact me : العاب بنات , موقع ترجمة

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fadetoblack22 Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 312 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: Reluctant Models Some advice would be to zoom in closer (or step closer) and use a lower f stop to bring them out from the background.

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