First Storyboard Attempt...

FocalPrincess · 13th of October 2008 (Mon)

Please tell me how I did? I used available photos, so they're not a progression, like I'd normally do.

Kauaicrazed · 14th of October 2008 (Tue)

Very cute! I like it!

Liesl · 14th of October 2008 (Tue)

I like it too. Is there a way you could flip the images so he is always going the same direction? I see a progression there from him looking over his shoulder to looking at the camera...not saying it would be better, but I'm just curious what it would look like that way.

Cute however you do it! Good job.

JohnEBongo · 14th of October 2008 (Tue)

The execution is very nice, but the 1st and 3rd images are almost identical as are the 2nd and 4th images. Using poses that are not so similar will make for a better end result.

sevillafox · 14th of October 2008 (Tue)

It's cute. I'd agree that the poses are a little similar and the last one seems more washed out than the others. But, I'm guessing the point here was just to play and practice the skills.

FocalPrincess · 14th of October 2008 (Tue)

Quote:

Originally Posted by Liesl

I like it too. Is there a way you could flip the images so he is always going the same direction? I see a progression there from him looking over his shoulder to looking at the camera...not saying it would be better, but I'm just curious what it would look like that way.

Cute however you do it! Good job.

Hmm, good thought. I'll give that a try!

Quote:

Originally Posted by sevillafox

It's cute. I'd agree that the poses are a little similar and the last one seems more washed out than the others. But, I'm guessing the point here was just to play and practice the skills.

Yep, right on...I wanted to see if I could make it look like something other than 4 photos in a line.

I think i have one more set of pictures that it might work with.

KaseyK · 15th of October 2008 (Wed)

BBrat · 16th of October 2008 (Thu)

Very cute, look good to me.

on a side note....How are story boards done? is there a site I could go to, and see how its done?

Chet · 16th of October 2008 (Thu)

I didn't know you had 4 little ones, they really look alike are the quads? Good job on them they must keep you very busy.

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Liesl Member Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Wisconsin Posts: 428 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: First Storyboard Attempt... I like it too. Is there a way you could flip the images so he is always going the same direction? I see a progression there from him looking over his shoulder to looking at the camera...not saying it would be better, but I'm just curious what it would look like that way. Cute however you do it! Good job. __________________ www.flickr.com/photos/smile_pretty

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sevillafox I'm good with pathetic! Really, I am. Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Southwest Wisconsin Skill Level: sucktographer Posts: 25,150	Re: First Storyboard Attempt... It's cute. I'd agree that the poses are a little similar and the last one seems more washed out than the others. But, I'm guessing the point here was just to play and practice the skills. __________________ Tiffany hopeless smooshoholic......I ♥ smoosh! gear

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