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I went to NYC with the family today and we stumbled across this...
![]() Comments and criticism welcome, and appreciated. (Taken with a 15MM Fisheye on my 350D) |
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Soo, it sucks?
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It seems a bit too dark, and mostly out of focus. I love the meaning and significance, I just think it needs to stand out more.
Try some post processing to bring out the rusted colors and see what you come up with. |
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I would invite any help on the editing. I'm still a complete noob with photoshop. |
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PS nube here too, but I would suggest a selection of the steel pieces, bumping up the saturation and adjusting the brightness/contrast/sharpness of the pieces as you go. The granite looks like it needs a nudge too.
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The subject is good, but it could use a bit of brightening up. I just did a few curves/levels and tried to fix the distortions, hope you don't mind.
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Don't mind at all, the only stuff I really know how to do in PS is to adjust color/saturation for a whole photo, haven't figured out the parts yet. |
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