Mate (bmxer)

Jack.W · 26th of January 2009 (Mon)

Pohotgraphed a mate today not very many shots as my camera died

Jack.Wilby

Nate P. · 27th of January 2009 (Tue)

Nice shots, what happened to the camera?

Jack.W · 28th of January 2009 (Wed)

out of battery thats all thanks for the comment

Spencerj · 29th of January 2009 (Thu)

When you said "Died" I thought it was going to be more dramatic

namasste · 29th of January 2009 (Thu)

nice series...here's a few things that I would sugggest to really get these where they should be (obviously imo)

1. shoot this head on a little sooner (seems just a touch late so he's too low on the wall). a small vignette would look cool too

2. should have shot where the grate wasn't visible. lift some shadows and add a soft light layer (low opacity to add some color and contrast) A very light effect (like Dave Hill) would be really cool on this one.

3. needs some curve adjsutments to tame the highlights and lift shadows

4. just need to bring the skys down a stop or so.

5. lift shadows in shirt and pants

6. just use some rule of thirds in the comp and you're money...I really like this shot of the footjam.

Hope that is helpful. Again, nice series, a little post work and this are very good.

Jack.W · 30th of January 2009 (Fri)

Quote:

Originally Posted by namasste

nice series...here's a few things that I would sugggest to really get these where they should be (obviously imo)

1. shoot this head on a little sooner (seems just a touch late so he's too low on the wall). a small vignette would look cool too

2. should have shot where the grate wasn't visible. lift some shadows and add a soft light layer (low opacity to add some color and contrast) A very light effect (like Dave Hill) would be really cool on this one.

3. needs some curve adjsutments to tame the highlights and lift shadows

4. just need to bring the skys down a stop or so.

5. lift shadows in shirt and pants

6. just use some rule of thirds in the comp and you're money...I really like this shot of the footjam.

Hope that is helpful. Again, nice series, a little post work and this are very good.

Thanks for the critic really helps i will have to watch out and will do with my next set.

Jack

26th of January 2009 (Mon)	#1
Jack.W Member Join Date: Jan 2009 Posts: 65	Mate (bmxer) Pohotgraphed a mate today not very many shots as my camera died Jack.Wilby

27th of January 2009 (Tue)	#2
Nate P. Member Join Date: May 2008 Location: Monterey Bay, Calif. Posts: 278	Re: Mate (bmxer) Nice shots, what happened to the camera? __________________ fuji x100

28th of January 2009 (Wed)	#3
Jack.W Member Join Date: Jan 2009 Posts: 65	Re: Mate (bmxer) out of battery thats all thanks for the comment

29th of January 2009 (Thu)	#4
Spencerj Member Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Essex, UK Posts: 675 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: Mate (bmxer) When you said "Died" I thought it was going to be more dramatic __________________ Flickr

29th of January 2009 (Thu)	#5
namasste Cream of the Crop Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: NE Ohio Posts: 6,596 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: Mate (bmxer) nice series...here's a few things that I would sugggest to really get these where they should be (obviously imo) 1. shoot this head on a little sooner (seems just a touch late so he's too low on the wall). a small vignette would look cool too 2. should have shot where the grate wasn't visible. lift some shadows and add a soft light layer (low opacity to add some color and contrast) A very light effect (like Dave Hill) would be really cool on this one. 3. needs some curve adjsutments to tame the highlights and lift shadows 4. just need to bring the skys down a stop or so. 5. lift shadows in shirt and pants 6. just use some rule of thirds in the comp and you're money...I really like this shot of the footjam. Hope that is helpful. Again, nice series, a little post work and this are very good. __________________ Scott Evans Photography SportsShooterProfile l MaxPreps Profile Gear List

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