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Old 14th of February 2009 (Sat)   #1
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Opinions on these shots, anyone?

If you feel there is anything that should be improved please let me know how so the next ones will come out better...






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Old 14th of February 2009 (Sat)   #2
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I like the composition of these both. In the 1st one I like the DOF, in the second the colors work well for me. Nice shots.
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Old 14th of February 2009 (Sat)   #3
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I very much like the first one. I might crop it just to the left of the one face at far right that's out of alignment with the others.
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Old 17th of February 2009 (Tue)   #4
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Thanks for your comments!

I tried cropping just like jgrussel said. Here it is:



Is that better?

Isn't this composition driving viewer's eye out of the picture?
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Old 17th of February 2009 (Tue)   #5
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I like the 2nd one better! Good job!

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