Women's Lacrosse - Div I - Stony Brook vs Boston

aram535 · 7th of April 2009 (Tue)

Feedback is appreciated. I'm trying a couple of new shots that are a little busier than normal to show peak of action. Not convinced yet, as they seem to distracting to me.

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1downfall · 7th of April 2009 (Tue)

I like #5 and #4 the most. The others seem ...well..distracting like you said.
#1...the white rails take away from the action a bit. I might crop more of the below feet area on this one.
#2..this actually is another good shot to me. Just don't like the thing on the left side sticking out./
#3..i think focus missed somewhere?

aram535 · 8th of April 2009 (Wed)

This is why a second set of eyes is always welcomed. You're right on 1 and 3. #3 looks like the focus in somewhere between #8 and the SB player's knee so her face got out of the DOF. Not sure if I can fix #1, maybe if I under exposed the fence, it might melt a little.

#2 is a back of someone else's shoe that I didn't want to crop anymore but it was fixed in photoshop later on when I noticed it.

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7th of April 2009 (Tue)	#1
aram535 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Long Island, NY Posts: 1,905 IMAGE EDITING OK	Women's Lacrosse - Div I - Stony Brook vs Boston Feedback is appreciated. I'm trying a couple of new shots that are a little busier than normal to show peak of action. Not convinced yet, as they seem to distracting to me. 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. __________________ Gear List * www.tranquilphotos.com * My Blog

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1downfall Goldmember Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: virginia beach, va Posts: 3,965 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: Women's Lacrosse - Div I - Stony Brook vs Boston I like #5 and #4 the most. The others seem ...well..distracting like you said. #1...the white rails take away from the action a bit. I might crop more of the below feet area on this one. #2..this actually is another good shot to me. Just don't like the thing on the left side sticking out./ #3..i think focus missed somewhere? __________________ Bill Flickr My Gear http://wjphotography.smugmug.com/ http://www.facebook.com/pages/Virgin...739449?ref=sgm

8th of April 2009 (Wed)	#3
aram535 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Long Island, NY Posts: 1,905 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: Women's Lacrosse - Div I - Stony Brook vs Boston This is why a second set of eyes is always welcomed. You're right on 1 and 3. #3 looks like the focus in somewhere between #8 and the SB player's knee so her face got out of the DOF. Not sure if I can fix #1, maybe if I under exposed the fence, it might melt a little. #2 is a back of someone else's shoe that I didn't want to crop anymore but it was fixed in photoshop later on when I noticed it. __________________ Gear List * www.tranquilphotos.com * My Blog