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Took these over the weekend for a friend of mine. Still learning, trying out new techniques.
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Nice spread. #2 seems dark with lights too bright. I'm sure that is tough to work out. All the lights seemed a little bright. #4 seemed either badly out of focus or camera shake. Still and all I liked the effort and would like to see more of the same subject.
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What type of processing did you use on the sky in the 3rd picture?
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I like the third one.
My friend almost bought an R1. He bought a used 2005 Ninja instead.
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Is it a US thing, both indicators are on?
Nice pics, nice bike I always have a smile when I see expensive armored jackets and jeans & trainers (pic #2) N
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best shots # 3 & # 5
great action #3 and subject matte r#5 - #5 back ground intersteing nun the less |
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#3 and 5 have turned into my favorites out of the shoot. I'll probably work on the others when i have some more time on my hands.
The sky is just a simple orange gradient. Too much attention was given to the blown-out sky so that's why i did that. Thanks for the replys! |
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Third one is awesome. Love it, the rest are decent.
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Notice in all pictures the both lights headlights are not working only the one on the left side of the bike if you were sitting on it is working.
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Correction they both seem to be on in the last image
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right they're on full bright in the last picture. I dunno I think its kind of neat that only one side comes on. I mean look how much attention it's gotten. And if I were a biker I'd sure want people to recognize me on the road!
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I liked the one headlight effect but everybody who didn't know that's how it's supposed to be would tell me I had a headlight out...
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