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Old 15th of May 2009 (Fri)   #1
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Old 15th of May 2009 (Fri)   #2
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Love the colours Chunli!
I would rotate anti-clockwise a little, and crop the left off.
Also, what is that weird shadow above the fireworks on the right? Smoke?

Looks like you've been to another high vantage point again!

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The bridge looks promising... would have loved to see more made of that as a lead in line, angling the camera down further, with the fireworks higher in frame. Counter-clockwise rotation's a must. Cheers, Tony
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The horizon tilts down at the right, and the color balance seems off - too red.
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Old 18th of May 2009 (Mon)   #5
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Default Re: Firework Display

I must admit I did not realise the horizon tilts down at the right. I should have corrected that. hahaha.....

Thank you all for pointing that out to me.

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Interesting suggestion on the possible perspective. ok will try that out if they organise another firework display this year.

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