Critique wanted

Bonito · 2nd of June 2009 (Tue)

Hi everyone,
Would like some constructive critiques on these photos.

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3.
Thanks for taking a look!

lindsaytblum · 2nd of June 2009 (Tue)

Hi! The first photo is nice, your subject is really sharp. The only thing that distracts me from your subject is that chain/rope thing behind the bird.

I like the second photo. I think you did a really good job exposing the sky. I think it is great that you chose to vertically orient this photo, because the posts coming out of the water lead my eyes upward to observe the building.

Photo 3 is so cute! The goslings look really nice, but the adult swan's feathers lose detail on its upper back (I find it really hard to not overblow highlights on white birds.)

photogirlmb · 2nd of June 2009 (Tue)

I like all three photos...in the first shot I would try to get rid of the chain behind the bird...it is a distraction...cloning it out would help....the second one has a lot going on in it...I would try some cropping to see if I could narrow the focus...but thats really a personal choice...good job....
Mary Ann

2nd of June 2009 (Tue)	#1
Bonito Member Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Massachusetts Posts: 99 IMAGE EDITING OK	Critique wanted Hi everyone, Would like some constructive critiques on these photos. 1. 2. 3. Thanks for taking a look! __________________ Jenn Canon XTi Gripped, Canon 100-400 L, Canon 100mm Macro, Sigma 17-70 Macro,Canon 18-55 & Canon 75-300 Canon 580EX II flash, Manfrotto 055XPRO tripod with a Giottos MH-1301 head

2nd of June 2009 (Tue)	#2
lindsaytblum Goldmember Join Date: May 2008 Location: Chesterfield, MO Posts: 2,523	Re: Critique wanted Hi! The first photo is nice, your subject is really sharp. The only thing that distracts me from your subject is that chain/rope thing behind the bird. I like the second photo. I think you did a really good job exposing the sky. I think it is great that you chose to vertically orient this photo, because the posts coming out of the water lead my eyes upward to observe the building. Photo 3 is so cute! The goslings look really nice, but the adult swan's feathers lose detail on its upper back (I find it really hard to not overblow highlights on white birds.) __________________ Canon 7D Gripped \| 100mm f/2.8L IS USM, 85mm f/1.8, 17-40mm f/4 www.lindsayblum.com

2nd of June 2009 (Tue)	#3
photogirlmb Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: West Coast of Canada Posts: 8	Re: Critique wanted I like all three photos...in the first shot I would try to get rid of the chain behind the bird...it is a distraction...cloning it out would help....the second one has a lot going on in it...I would try some cropping to see if I could narrow the focus...but thats really a personal choice...good job.... Mary Ann __________________ ********* Canon 40D, Canon 100-400mm L IS, Sigma 18-200mm, Canon 17- 85mm IS, Canon 55-250mm,

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