sanctuary of love

P. Jack Hankering · 12th of August 2001 (Sun)

This is a shot from a private home in a town nearby. Please let me know what you think.

gbjune · 12th of August 2001 (Sun)

It's an interesting picture, but I think the statue in the foreground is a bit too much out of focus (at least in my eyes, on my monitor)...

Also, the composition seems too noisy, there's nothing that my eyes are drawn towards, no clear message...

Geir

John Smith · 4th of September 2001 (Tue)

I like the idea but as Geir said, there is something that distract the eye. May be the leaves on the left side. can you crop it out?

P. Jack Hankering · 4th of September 2001 (Tue)

I see what you both mean, it is a little busy, but I was trying to get the point across that the place is filled with religious icons everywhere you look amongst the overgrown grass and regular stuff you would find in someone's yard (like the lawnmower). Maybe I'll go back for another shot and try a different composition. In the meantime if you follow the link in my other post you'll see some others from the same place that I think work a little better. Please let me know what you think.

P. Jack Hankering · 4th of September 2001 (Tue)

here's the link:
http://www.dryheaves.com/album/index.htm

12th of August 2001 (Sun)	#1
P. Jack Hankering Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2001 Posts: 5	sanctuary of love This is a shot from a private home in a town nearby. Please let me know what you think.

12th of August 2001 (Sun)	#2
gbjune Member Join Date: Jun 2001 Posts: 47	Re: sanctuary of love It's an interesting picture, but I think the statue in the foreground is a bit too much out of focus (at least in my eyes, on my monitor)... Also, the composition seems too noisy, there's nothing that my eyes are drawn towards, no clear message... Geir

4th of September 2001 (Tue)	#3
John Smith Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2001 Posts: 10	Re: sanctuary of love I like the idea but as Geir said, there is something that distract the eye. May be the leaves on the left side. can you crop it out?

4th of September 2001 (Tue)	#4
P. Jack Hankering Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2001 Posts: 5	Re: sanctuary of love I see what you both mean, it is a little busy, but I was trying to get the point across that the place is filled with religious icons everywhere you look amongst the overgrown grass and regular stuff you would find in someone's yard (like the lawnmower). Maybe I'll go back for another shot and try a different composition. In the meantime if you follow the link in my other post you'll see some others from the same place that I think work a little better. Please let me know what you think.

4th of September 2001 (Tue)	#5
P. Jack Hankering Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2001 Posts: 5	Re: sanctuary of love here's the link: http://www.dryheaves.com/album/index.htm

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