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Took this tonight of my 22month old son
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Sorry not a big fan of the PP, looks rather cartoonish to me. He's a cutie with brilliant eyes, I'd aim to highlight his features and find a less distracting background.
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What about the pp seems cartoonish? As in what should I tone down on? I am trying to get a good solid fun fresh color PP. That can be one of my main PP workflows. I tend to do a lot of fun crazy PP..but need a solid color one.
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The skin has lost detail. His shirt and face blend with the wooden walk. He has a white glow around his face and a yellow glow around his hair. I would really try and burn/darken the background the let him rule the foreground. Could you share the original to see what was done?
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Here is the original
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I tried to isolate him from the background.
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what about this one?
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thanks for your edit
Thanks for your participation btw.. since you are the only one |
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I am going to be the Devil's Advocate and say that I like the first the best. LOL! Granted I think the subject it a touch too bright.
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Ha! Thanks Ryan
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Looking for a Rock
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Part of the hair is a bit hot as well...
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Anyone else wanna help me out??
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what about this one?
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Here is my very very quick edit to this one...
Very cute little boy! ![]()
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