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These are both experimental. I wanted that grungy look to do something artistic. I cranked the Gamma all the way to the left, messed with luminosity, maxed out the strength and saturation, but minimized the smoothing.
This first one is of my kitchen ![]() This next one is just a few trinkets I collected. ![]()
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Maybe it's just me but in the first, if the counter wasn't blown out on the corner, I think it'd be a little better. The second....I can't put my finger on it but it doesn't quite do it for me at all.
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sorry, they don't do it for me. i doubt that these scenes require HDR processing -- their dynamic range should fit well within a well exposed single shot (maybe with the exception of the ceiling lights, but there's no details there in your processed image either).
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both seem way to dark
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The strong orange cast kills them for me, but the Chick-Fil-A cup is worth a few ratings points.
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The strong orange cast kills them for me, but the tiki is worth a few ratings points.
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dude, clean your kitchen!
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Thanks for the feedback. I realise most HDR guys don't like that grungy look, but it strikes me how. I like it. Granted, I like the realistic HDR better, but still.
Thanks for the comments.
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FWIW, I like the grungy aspect, just think the tones need to be cooled off.
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Agreed with my buddy, Brad (polarbare)... these shots have a lot of potential but are too warm for my taste. Try sliding down the temp slider and see what you get with that. I do like where you're going with these shots, though.
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