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18th of August 2009 (Tue)
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Dance Recital
Last years spring recital
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19th of August 2009 (Wed)
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Re: Dance Recital
Sorry, but doesn't work for me.
Point for point. Not to be blunt, but these are the issues I see. Some smaller, some bigger: Image isn't sharp. Hard to tell whether it's motion blur or OoF, but it isn't crisp. White balance is so-so (could be a matter of taste) Odd crop: Missing and 'loose' body parts everywhere. Lots of kids blocking each other. No point of interest in the image, making it very "busy". On the bright side: Plenty room for improvement.  Also, take courage: this is *very* hard to shoot (a band is way simpler), and everybody has to run into all of these issues a few times, before recognizing them before shooting...
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