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Old 6th of November 2009 (Fri)   #1
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My daughter and her cousin getting ready for a day of apple picking. Is this too saturated?
Shutter- 1/50
Aperture- f 5.0
ISO- 100
Focal length- 65mm
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Yes, bit oversaturated. Also, you should be using a faster shutter speed (to minimize blur and increase sharpness) especially since it's so bright outside. Feel free to bump your ISO to 800, and then you can go ahead with the faster shutter speed.

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Color Balance may be off - looks too yellowish here.

Quite a few areas look blown out, so you are overexposed.

I would frame the subjects into the right half of the frame rather than the left half. They seem to be in the wrong half. Is that due to our being a left to right culture?
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I would frame the subjects into the right half of the frame rather than the left half. They seem to be in the wrong half. Is that due to our being a left to right culture?
Not really sure why I cropped them on the left side. Does this look better?
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In my opinion - yes!
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