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Old 11th of November 2009 (Wed)   #1
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Default Amsterdam, C&C please.

CnC please, shot some weeks ago in Amsterdam.
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Old 11th of November 2009 (Wed)   #2
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Default Re: Amsterdam, C&C please.

to much pp
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Old 11th of November 2009 (Wed)   #3
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Default Re: Amsterdam, C&C please.

Seems flat to me. No dimension to it.
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Old 11th of November 2009 (Wed)   #4
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Default Re: Amsterdam, C&C please.

What is with the sky? Halos are everywhere, and the crop is odd? Very helter skelter feel for me.sorry.
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Old 11th of November 2009 (Wed)   #5
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Default Re: Amsterdam, C&C please.

HDR?
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Old 11th of November 2009 (Wed)   #6
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Default Re: Amsterdam, C&C please.

Nope, not HDR...mainly I wanted it to look like a postcard or something like that. Hope that next time the results will be better.
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Old 12th of November 2009 (Thu)   #7
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Default Re: Amsterdam, C&C please.

I find this image very interesting! People tend to look at images from one dimension.... but this one as an image definitely is interesting. Keep up the great work!
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Old 12th of November 2009 (Thu)   #8
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I like the print tone of the buildings but am not crazy about the sky even if expressive and creative, it isn't consistent enough for my tastes to be a conclusive element. It is interesting in the 3rd building from the left that the windows progressively shrink in size from bottom to top, not quite a golden mean ratio but definitely similar.

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I'm not a fan of the post processing.
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Default Re: Amsterdam, C&C please.

There is a halo around the top of the houses, plus there is a funny curvy line in the sky, plus there seems to be no depth whatsoever. I think you can capture Amsterdam better then this!
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i would love this if the cars werent there!
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Old 12th of November 2009 (Thu)   #12
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over processed...
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Default Re: Amsterdam, C&C please.

I agree that it's over-processed and one reason that's so noticeable is that the image lacks a focal point...my eyes don't quite know where to look, so they look at the processing. Doesn't seem to have a point of view.
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Default Re: Amsterdam, C&C please.

I think it looks like an 80's maybe 90's video from Peter Gabriel- waiting for the cars to start moving and the music to start. Please don't be offended, I say that because I LOVE it!!! It is very unique, flat and bizarre all at the same time. For modern artsy-effect, in my book you get an A+
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Default Re: Amsterdam, C&C please.

I think the picture had more potential with a real sky. Just my 2 cents. I like all the windows.
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