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I've been working on my photo skills, all comments welcome, Thanks

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Could you please post a larger version of this?

From that size all I can tell is that the background hurts my eyes lol

Dec 02, 2009 22:06

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No it won't let me. You can see it here
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AmandaMarie is right it would be helpful to see a larger version. From this small one I'd say its overexposed a bit and there are some distracting background elements. The focus appears to be sharp and I like the fact that you got down to your animals level to photograph it. Great looking dog by the way. You've got to love "mans best friend". Jeff

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PhotogJeff wrote in post #9125104external link
AmandaMarie is right it would be helpful to see a larger version. From this small one I'd say its overexposed a bit and there are some distracting background elements. The focus appears to be sharp and I like the fact that you got down to your animals level to photograph it. Great looking dog by the way. You've got to love "mans best friend". Jeff

I echo his sentiments.

Dec 02, 2009 22:25

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I can't get a larger version to post. It tells me they are all too big.????

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Thanks

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Do you have any version of photoshop or another editing program?

There should be a "save for web" option.

Dec 02, 2009 22:38

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I have elements 8. I'll look thanks

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Got it thanks

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The shot may be focused at the nose, and not the eyes, which might be part of the issue of the coat - but yes, the background is too much. Try again!

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I think the flash is too harsh, and the background should be a little further behind the dog, while using a larger aperture will help to blur it a bit. This would help cut down on the distracting nature of it.

It also looks like you missed focus as Scott said.

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Thanks for all the help. I'll try some pp It was spur of the moment shot. Thanks again for the critique it really helps.

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Don't punch the shutter. Stroke it.

Dec 03, 2009 14:41

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