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Old 27th of December 2009 (Sun)   #1
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Can't decide if I like it enough to put on my flickr. I'm really dissapointed about the sky. It was 100% cloudy and impossible to work with. But I just love the little birdie so much.

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edit: I feel like I should get rid of some of those distracting pesky little branches in the background. and somehow get rid of the glow around the other ones...

ahhhhhhhhh! what's a girl to do!?
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Old 27th of December 2009 (Sun)   #2
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I absolutely agree with the idea of removing the branches in the background.

It's a little gem that needs a bit of TLC to shine at it's full potential.
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Old 27th of December 2009 (Sun)   #3
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Nice, I like the composition and the "cut". The annoying OOF branches can be cloned out. And why not put a gradient layer behind it after cutting away the background white...? I know - it is cheating a bit, but it is the result that counts... not how you got there.
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Old 28th of December 2009 (Mon)   #4
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I think this looks much better.
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Old 28th of December 2009 (Mon)   #5
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Did you try some "colouring" to replace the white? I think you did..... very subtle....

BTW, I notice a bit of blue fringing on the main branch. PS CS4 is good at getting rid of that too.
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Old 28th of December 2009 (Mon)   #6
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No. I didn't.

And yeah, I did my best to get rid of the blue. Oh well.
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Old 28th of December 2009 (Mon)   #7
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The second one looks a lot better to me. You did fantastic. Good job!
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Old 28th of December 2009 (Mon)   #8
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Thank you

I'd like to submit it to the CWF. I can't seem to save it at about ~2mb. It keeps going from 7 to 1. But it has to be minimum 2 mb to submit it.

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I can live with the blown sky and the OOF branches. What I can't live with is the bird being OOF. Sadly this kills the shot.
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I wouldn't use this shot. The sky is too blownout, the bird is OOF and the leaves and branches are distracting.
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Old 28th of December 2009 (Mon)   #11
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I can live with the blown sky and the OOF branches. What I can't live with is the bird being OOF. Sadly this kills the shot.
I agree.....and I think its Red Poll...
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Old 28th of December 2009 (Mon)   #12
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birdies are cute ... mask for white and change the hue to a nice pale blue

On my calibrated monitor there is a purple and green fringing on the high contrast edges. Which lens were you using and at what aperture? Thanks.

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I didn't think the bird was oof. sigh. oh well.
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How's this? I played with the sky and sharpened a lil.
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I like it with that bit of blue in the sky.
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