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Old 1st of January 2010 (Fri)   #1
velvetwoodstock
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Default Work in progress- A magritte style self portrait (to be)

Eventually planning on placing myself in the photo, either crawling through an opening or something along those lines. Any critique would be wonderful.


Also The shadow, I realize, is quite a bit off.
Oh and this is my first post here, so hello everyone!

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Old 1st of January 2010 (Fri)   #2
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Default Re: Work in progress- A magritte style self portrait (to be)

hi Velvet!

this is a cool piece. I can't wait to see the final draft, I really want to know where you are going with this. Then the
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Old 2nd of January 2010 (Sat)   #3
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I think you should have the two openings show two slightly incompatible poses. Nothing obviously wrong, just enough to give that "something's not quite right" feeling at an almost subconscious level.
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