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Join Date: Nov 2009
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Eventually planning on placing myself in the photo, either crawling through an opening or something along those lines. Any critique would be wonderful.
Also The shadow, I realize, is quite a bit off. Oh and this is my first post here, so hello everyone! ![]() |
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hi Velvet!
this is a cool piece. I can't wait to see the final draft, I really want to know where you are going with this. Then the |
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Posts: 35
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I think you should have the two openings show two slightly incompatible poses. Nothing obviously wrong, just enough to give that "something's not quite right" feeling at an almost subconscious level.
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