My attempt with a model and a...desert? in Florida?

aznsoccerstar11 · 20th of January 2010 (Wed)

just two so far.

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Meanderthal · 20th of January 2010 (Wed)

#2 is quite charming, and the colors work well together. Might have moved the camera a bit to the right, to get more sun on the model's face, and getting the model from the center of the frame while keeping the sun where it is. In #1 the model has an interesting setting but she won't like the look of her legs or the barrel-like appearance of the outfit. Hmm, turning her somewhat in the direction of the man would have made the scene friendlier. Then legs closer together, and lift the knee a bit. What did you wish to convey, as the artist?

aznsoccerstar11 · 20th of January 2010 (Wed)

I actually have quite a few more to edit I just started with these,
but
number 2 there really wasnt sun as it is a lens flare and strobes.

as far as number one just going for something different the male in the back reaching and hungry while the model is posing as if nothing is going on.

MikePrattPhotography · 20th of January 2010 (Wed)

WOW.. great shots..LOVE number 2

ChadAndreo · 20th of January 2010 (Wed)

where were these taking?

chomish · 20th of January 2010 (Wed)

Wow great shots!!! Lighting is great. She definately pops from image. Kinda looks like its a fake background. Good job.

aznsoccerstar11 · 20th of January 2010 (Wed)

Quote:

Originally Posted by MikePrattPhotography

WOW.. great shots..LOVE number 2

thanks!

Quote:

Originally Posted by chomish

Wow great shots!!! Lighting is great. She definately pops from image. Kinda looks like its a fake background. Good job.

thanks!

Quote:

Originally Posted by bimmeracer3

where were these taking?

Florida desert

In Orlando

tony rage · 20th of March 2010 (Sat)

Is there a desert here in Orlando

?? where is it!? geez! been here for 9 years and have never seen one! good photos btw

5Dmaniac · 20th of March 2010 (Sat)

Where is her shadow in #1? The grasses in the sand throw a shadow, but she does not. It almost looks like you pasted her into the scene and therefor it looks fake to me.

lukeap69 · 20th of March 2010 (Sat)

very nice mate. i like the colours in #1.

sobieski · 20th of March 2010 (Sat)

Sure it is..Fake. No shadows (only a small piece of it) in the second one as well..

hpulley · 20th of March 2010 (Sat)

No desert in Florida, yet

I like #2, more natural, lovely. The first one is trying to be a hot shot but the pose seems unnatural so it doesn't seem as sexy to me.

photoguy6405 · 20th of March 2010 (Sat)

Quote:

Originally Posted by aznsoccerstar11

as far as number one just going for something different the male in the back reaching and hungry while the model is posing as if nothing is going on.

I like #1 better, precisely for this reason. It's different and made me smile in appreciation.

sulla · 21st of March 2010 (Sun)

#2 is very nice.
#1 is just odd, looks like a composite. No tracks in the sand , no shadows, and heels in the "desert".... just doesn't work for me.

DN003 · 21st of March 2010 (Sun)

Great shots!

20th of January 2010 (Wed)	#3
aznsoccerstar11 Member Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Orlando, Florida Posts: 376 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: My attempt with a model and a...desert? in Florida? I actually have quite a few more to edit I just started with these, but number 2 there really wasnt sun as it is a lens flare and strobes. as far as number one just going for something different the male in the back reaching and hungry while the model is posing as if nothing is going on. __________________ my new site! www.TroyHuynh.com www.flickr.com/aznsoccerstar11 www.v2lab.com

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chomish Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 1,917 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: My attempt with a model and a...desert? in Florida? Wow great shots!!! Lighting is great. She definately pops from image. Kinda looks like its a fake background. Good job.

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tony rage Member Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: orlando, Fl Posts: 602 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: My attempt with a model and a...desert? in Florida? Is there a desert here in Orlando?? where is it!? geez! been here for 9 years and have never seen one! good photos btw __________________ 1DMKII:: Canon 85mm 1.8:: Canon 50mm 1.8:: Canon 28-105mm:: Canon 430EX:: Zuiko 50mm 1.8:: Zuiko 35-105mm::

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aznsoccerstar11 Member Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Orlando, Florida Posts: 376 IMAGE EDITING OK	My attempt with a model and a...desert? in Florida? just two so far. 1. 2. 3 4 5 6 7 8 __________________ my new site! www.TroyHuynh.com www.flickr.com/aznsoccerstar11 www.v2lab.com Last edited by aznsoccerstar11 : 30th of March 2010 (Tue) at 00:35.

20th of January 2010 (Wed)	#2
Meanderthal Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Canada, btw Ottawa-Toronto Posts: 510 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: My attempt with a model and a...desert? in Florida? #2 is quite charming, and the colors work well together. Might have moved the camera a bit to the right, to get more sun on the model's face, and getting the model from the center of the frame while keeping the sun where it is. In #1 the model has an interesting setting but she won't like the look of her legs or the barrel-like appearance of the outfit. Hmm, turning her somewhat in the direction of the man would have made the scene friendlier. Then legs closer together, and lift the knee a bit. What did you wish to convey, as the artist?

20th of March 2010 (Sat)	#9
5Dmaniac Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Scottsdale, AZ Posts: 1,274 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: My attempt with a model and a...desert? in Florida? Where is her shadow in #1? The grasses in the sand throw a shadow, but she does not. It almost looks like you pasted her into the scene and therefor it looks fake to me.

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sulla Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Edwardsville, Illinois Posts: 110 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: My attempt with a model and a...desert? in Florida? #2 is very nice. #1 is just odd, looks like a composite. No tracks in the sand , no shadows, and heels in the "desert".... just doesn't work for me. __________________ Name: Scott Kane My Gear Here, flickr photos, My Web Site, Sports Shooter

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