C&C Please... Play hardball if you may.

ED Altares · 16th of March 2010 (Tue)

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Thanks and best regards to you all.

rooeey · 16th of March 2010 (Tue)

mmmmm why no response nice shots IMO...
I suppose it would be nice if the hair did not dissapear into the bg

deathcake · 16th of March 2010 (Tue)

I quite like these, nice lighting but agreed - a bit more detail in the hair would be nice. Interesting hats!

ED Altares · 16th of March 2010 (Tue)

Thanks rooeey. Thanks deathcarke. I agree that the lighting on the hair needs some some work. I'll keep that in mind next time around.

Flo · 17th of March 2010 (Wed)

Pretty.I like the second. I would play with those eyes, the catchlights seem flat? Agree about the hair light.

ED Altares · 17th of March 2010 (Wed)

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Originally Posted by Flo

Pretty.I like the second. I would play with those eyes, the catchlights seem flat? Agree about the hair light.

Catchlight's flat yes. My bad. I should get a beauty disk soon. Thanks.

gonzogolf · 17th of March 2010 (Wed)

Generally I like them but I do have a couple of thoughts. With these being framed similar to headshots there is no eye contact at all. In the second shot, there is almost an intentional "I'm not looking at you" expression going on. I think if you are going to do the looking away shots you might want to frame them a little more loosely so we can see the environment she is in.

ED Altares · 17th of March 2010 (Wed)

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Originally Posted by gonzogolf

Generally I like them but I do have a couple of thoughts. With these being framed similar to headshots there is no eye contact at all. In the second shot, there is almost an intentional "I'm not looking at you" expression going on. I think if you are going to do the looking away shots you might want to frame them a little more loosely so we can see the environment she is in.

Thanks gonzgolf. I'll take note of that one and put that to use.

By the way, 4,000 posts... that's a lot of thing... amazing i got the exactly 4,000th. Keep them coming. Thanks again.

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deathcake Member Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Sydney, Australia Posts: 480 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: C&C Please... Play hardball if you may. I quite like these, nice lighting but agreed - a bit more detail in the hair would be nice. Interesting hats! __________________ [ gear ][ recent work ][ flickr ] “Your first 10,000 photographs are your worst.” - Henri Cartier-Bresson

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ED Altares Member Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Manila, Philippines Posts: 93 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: C&C Please... Play hardball if you may. Thanks rooeey. Thanks deathcarke. I agree that the lighting on the hair needs some some work. I'll keep that in mind next time around. __________________ http://edaltares.multiply.com http://edaltares.tumblr.com Canon 1000D, Canon 30D, Canon 10-22 mm, Canon 18-55 mm Kit, Canon 50mm F1.8, Sigma 70-300 mm, Tamron 28-75 F2.8

17th of March 2010 (Wed)	#5
Flo Gimmie Some Lovin Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Nanaimo,B.C. Posts: 44,174 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: C&C Please... Play hardball if you may. Pretty.I like the second. I would play with those eyes, the catchlights seem flat? Agree about the hair light. __________________ you're a great friend, but if Zombies chase us, I am tripping you.

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gonzogolf Cream of the Crop Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 20,020	Re: C&C Please... Play hardball if you may. Generally I like them but I do have a couple of thoughts. With these being framed similar to headshots there is no eye contact at all. In the second shot, there is almost an intentional "I'm not looking at you" expression going on. I think if you are going to do the looking away shots you might want to frame them a little more loosely so we can see the environment she is in.

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