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First Save the Date
Before I send off as draft #1, any suggestions would be great. Thanks!
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23rd of March 2010 (Tue)
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Re: First Save the Date
Its hard to read the last line of text. I would increase it slightly. I like the flow of everything, so I wouldn't want you to change anything drastically. Its just a concern....think of 50 year old + people this will be going out to with poor vision.
Overall, I think its excellent.
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24th of March 2010 (Wed)
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Re: First Save the Date
I love it... invitations to follow is small but its not an "important" line IMO. If someone has to look a little closer they will still think its a great std.
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24th of March 2010 (Wed)
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Re: First Save the Date
Great job! I love the font variation. Leave it the way it is. This looks like something I would've created
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24th of March 2010 (Wed)
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Re: First Save the Date
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24th of March 2010 (Wed)
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Re: First Save the Date
It looks great to me. They should be very happy with the result.
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Yeah, I was wondering about that after I posted that. On top of that, my screen res is 1920 x 1200, so it probably looks a bit smaller anyway. With the font size you mentioned it should be plenty readable. I wouldn't change a thing then.
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28th of March 2010 (Sun)
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Re: First Save the Date
Why is the "save the date" text so much bigger than the persons names?! Should be the other way around.
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Its not the invitation, just announcing the date. I see why you would wonder that though.
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But in today's world, I wonder the practicality of a flyer like this instead of getting the world out via email or social networking site that all their friends are already using. It is useful for old people that don't use the internet though. |
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