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Old 14th of April 2010 (Wed)   #1
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This is my first real attempt at both, a self portrait, and off camera flash. This is more of a test shot, as shooting people puts me way out of my comfort zone, so any and all tips are appreciated... I've used a single 430EXii with a shoot through umbrella.

If i could get some tips on PP as well as lighting etc that would be great, as i have absolutely no idea what to do with it!?!?! lol! So far just added a bit of contrast, dodged the eyes and sharpened with USM.

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Wow that's fab. Love it.
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I suppose you could clone and smooth skin to get the "hey I'm 20 year younger" look/feel. Apart from that, I don't see any further need to push the photo.
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I suppose you could clone and smooth skin to get the "hey I'm 20 year younger" look/feel. Apart from that, I don't see any further need to push the photo.
hehe! I wouldn't know how to, even if i wanted to!?! Plus, i'd have to draw in hair too, and that really would be hard work!

Thanks for the comments everyone
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Another attempt. Trying out a different PP. I'm not decided on the blown highlights!?!?! Part of me thinks it suits the style, but part of me thinks it's just plain wrong...

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Nice mate.. Great lighting on the first one!
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Cheers matt. Really wasn't sure what i was doing lol!?! I couldn't decide on the composition either... It looks kinda central, but i'm not sure that really hurts it. Need to play more!
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I think the centeral fill with with your shoulders works well..
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Plus one for the first one, for me I think I would prefer the second if the lighting was toned down a little
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Cheers Matt.

Yeah i know what you're saying Adrian, that's the overlay bumping the contrast up. I've tried to do a B&W conversion, which looks a little better, but i'm having trouble copying it without losing detail!?!?! The jpeg is coming out too dark for some reason!?!??!! The original is in 16bit RGB, and when i convert it to sRGB the whole thing muddies up!?!?!
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First one yes..nicely done.
Second one,.alot of magenta color.too harsh for me.Not flattering as the first one is.
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Thanks for commenting Gail, i'm inclined to agree with you on the 2nd one.
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Thanks for commenting Gail, i'm inclined to agree with you on the 2nd one.
I hate the camera pointed at me. so seeing you brave souls do it to yourselves gets a bravo from me
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I hate the camera pointed at me. so seeing you brave souls do it to yourselves gets a bravo from me
Same here actually (As Matt can testify lol!), just can't find anyone else who will let me shoot them lol!
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