What do you think?

XPLOSV · 18th of May 2010 (Tue)

1 of 30 engagement pic im working on. so I'm just getting your opinion on this.
will post a high res if needed.
Clean, level and the usual portrait retouch...
Might be a good game also, spot the different!!!

auroraskye · 18th of May 2010 (Tue)

Nice job, though personally i'd hit her eye area with a little brightness since she's got a shadow from his face.

texasreddirt · 19th of May 2010 (Wed)

Is it RAW? I would up the exposure some.

Doc Fluty · 20th of May 2010 (Thu)

seems you took off some orange color above his head... and added vibrance to the greens in the grass and trees.

I agree with the others in bumping up the exposure .5 or so... also if done in raw i would drop the exposure to get some of the detail in the sky back and then merge the different exposures. i see you did it a little and got some of the blue and branches back, is that as far as you can get it?

overall nice.. just a few tweaks and you got it..

banpreso · 21st of May 2010 (Fri)

i really like the skin tone of the original...

Dmab · 21st of May 2010 (Fri)

Looks like you amped up the clarity/vibrancy/sat in the after pic
And you cleaned up his face a little

18th of May 2010 (Tue)	#1
XPLOSV Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Australia Posts: 75	What do you think? 1 of 30 engagement pic im working on. so I'm just getting your opinion on this. will post a high res if needed. Clean, level and the usual portrait retouch... Might be a good game also, spot the different!!! __________________ -- Greatness is difficult to appreciate from close up. The great mountain on the horizon is only the ground when you are standing on it. --

18th of May 2010 (Tue)	#2
auroraskye Goldmember Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Plano, TX Posts: 2,445	Re: What do you think? Nice job, though personally i'd hit her eye area with a little brightness since she's got a shadow from his face. __________________ I am super cool n' stuff. http://www.brandithompsonphotography.com Like Me On Facebook

19th of May 2010 (Wed)	#3
texasreddirt Member Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 414	Re: What do you think? Is it RAW? I would up the exposure some.

20th of May 2010 (Thu)	#4
Doc Fluty Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2010 Posts: 1,359 IMAGE EDITING OK	Re: What do you think? seems you took off some orange color above his head... and added vibrance to the greens in the grass and trees. I agree with the others in bumping up the exposure .5 or so... also if done in raw i would drop the exposure to get some of the detail in the sky back and then merge the different exposures. i see you did it a little and got some of the blue and branches back, is that as far as you can get it? overall nice.. just a few tweaks and you got it.. __________________ See you on my Facebook Fan Page

21st of May 2010 (Fri)	#5
banpreso Goldmember Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Socal Posts: 2,151	Re: What do you think? i really like the skin tone of the original... __________________ Flickr

21st of May 2010 (Fri)	#6
Dmab Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Wisconsin Posts: 1,009	Re: What do you think? Looks like you amped up the clarity/vibrancy/sat in the after pic And you cleaned up his face a little __________________ Dan ======= Gear List

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