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PaisleyCrazy
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This is my second attempt with a newborn. The family raises honey bees so I couldn't resist the hat and diaper cover I found on Etsy. Unfortunatly baby slept for 4 hours before session so he was an angry little bee.

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Post #1, Sep 22, 2010 14:09:54


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The processing is a little flat - feels like it needs more contrast and brightness? It also distracts me that the dresser is slanted.

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IMAGE: http://i911.photobucket.com/albums/ac318/__lol__/SweetBee2.jpg
I couldn't properly explain myself so I just did that roughly to show you what I mean.
Like lookingforaname said, the box needs to be straightened. A bit of colour pop would work nicely, I raised the saturation of the red levels to bring out the babies skin more, and the yellow and green to give it a nice pop.
It might not be the look you are going for but it will help the image out. Also I found the dark vingetting a little distracting

Suc ha cute photo though, and you did a very good job for a cranky baby!

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You also might want to shop out the top of his nappy poking out :)

Post #4, Sep 22, 2010 18:19:12


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Sorry for the delayed repsone. My Computer got a bug thanks to my son downlaoding music but I am up and running again. Thanks for you input. She brought Jax back for a makeup shoot and he was much happier this time. Here are a few from the second shoot.

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Post #5, Sep 30, 2010 08:17:34


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The re-shoot is better but the baby is too dark. I played a little with it....not sure it is exactly what I was looking for.

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Post #6, Sep 30, 2010 10:37:36 as a reply to PaisleyCrazy's post 2 hours earlier.


Life is hard...but I just take it one photograph at a time.

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Bee-utiful! That baby is a real honey. cute shot!

Post #7, Sep 30, 2010 11:29:41


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