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Old 18th of December 2011 (Sun)   #3136
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^8/10. I like the concept and the high-radius processing really seems to work, but the highlights are a bit too bright for me and composition is lacking...something. Don't quite know what.
6/10 looks over exposed, no real detail on any of the cookies and the focal point seems to be on the logo in the middle instead of the cookies. If you could see the whole logo it would make a cool product shot - if that was the intention.



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Old 18th of December 2011 (Sun)   #3137
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4/10 Looks way over processed and framing is too tight on the top and left.

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would like to see more color saturation in the water's reflection. Maybe a bit more on the boat also, then add some space to the right of the boat. Like the concept.
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Me thinks you posted in the wrong thread
yup, I was looking at a photo on the wrong page- helps to be on the same page
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Old 18th of December 2011 (Sun)   #3140
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yup, I was looking at a photo on the wrong page- helps to be on the same page
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Old 19th of December 2011 (Mon)   #3141
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4/10 Looks way over processed and framing is too tight on the top and left.

love the silhouette but I would have preferred to have seen the entire plane and not a fan of the location of the watermark, takes away from the photo. 7/10.

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Old 19th of December 2011 (Mon)   #3142
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Really nice photo. 7/10. Almost seems to need a bit more background around her because the color looks so festive. Wondering if more of her hair length should have been included, because I'd rather crop the tops of heads as if often done, but not the lower part of the hair.

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Old 19th of December 2011 (Mon)   #3143
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8/10 not a big fan of angles but the texture and contrast more than make up for it. Pretty good work there.

Not sure if I should crop this, but it jumped out at me while I was shooting street in Jacksonville, FL. If you're in the area with your gear, it's worth a couple hours on foot.



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Old 19th of December 2011 (Mon)   #3144
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7/10
Like the mirrors, looks cool the way they refract the light. I would probably crop the brick on the bottom out of the image. Nice shorts.


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Old 19th of December 2011 (Mon)   #3145
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8/10 I really like this but maybe you could have played with lighting a little more. The dark corner of the guitar is kind of distracting compared to the rest of it but that is pretty minor
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8/10 I really like this but maybe you could have played with lighting a little more. The dark corner of the guitar is kind of distracting compared to the rest of it but that is pretty minor
7/10 Really like the blur but the cut off in the very front of the train showing the sign detracts as does the piece of paper right in the middle of the fence.

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6/10 Sky looks marvelous but I would have liked to see the ground and the trees a bit more.

One from the Christmas tree at the wedding hall I was at recently. Mostly white tree ornaments and lights. I figured it'd look nice in Black and White. ...and with my old star filter from my 35mm days.
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9/10 i love the lights affect. overall great b&w

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Old 19th of December 2011 (Mon)   #3149
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Good action shot but more bokeh and better lighting would have made for a better image. 7/10

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Old 19th of December 2011 (Mon)   #3150
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^^ 9/10. Nice panorama. I like the contrast and the horizontal lines. Maybe adding a few sun rays on the right side would make it more interesting? But, it's good as it is.

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