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CC plz :D

 
bedojo
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Feb 11, 2011 00:35 |  #1

here is a re-edit of an old one, C&C appreciated!
the stroby info was a yn460II (or ex430) shot through an umbrella camera left.
i watched a few tutorials from jason cole ( member here, guy who did the passion of the art: shooting glamour, DVD)
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& downloaded some nik software trials

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and the one from a while ago
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Feb 11, 2011 01:16 |  #2

The sky looks kinda weird, especially the treetops on the left. Probably fake, I think.

But the combination of the pink, the green, and the blue works really well! The lighting is nice but the light on her right cheek (left of the photo) is kinda harsh and renders the skin in a somewhat artificial tone.

Oh and, you should think of a more specific topic title since it's kinda obvious that you want CC in the Critique Corner :P


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Feb 11, 2011 06:26 |  #3

I think a recrop would be nice. There's too much pink coat in the frame. Maybe crop about 1/3 off the bottom & some off the sides to compensate.
Lovely lady there!


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Feb 11, 2011 08:56 |  #4

I really like the first one. Nice and bright. It reminds me of a stock image. Good job.


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Spike44
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Feb 11, 2011 09:23 |  #5

Yikes - blue too saturated and the PP shows in the tree tops..
I prefer the natural look of the 2nd.




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Feb 12, 2011 14:52 |  #6

thanks for your replys,


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