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My first pregnancy shot

 
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May 25, 2010 07:01 |  #1

So I was asked by a good friend to do some shots of his wife. I was happy with the overall results and wanted to see what your thoughts were of this particular shot:

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I am just a rookie and trying to learn as much as possible so critique away.

Thanks,
Mike




  
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May 25, 2010 13:41 |  #2

I think it looks good, but I can't see much of her. Just the pose and the angle of the shot are obstructing her. I think this angle may have worked, but then her arms are criss-crossing her body and to me it detracts from her belly which should be the focus. Then building really takes away from her. Instead of framing her as I imagined that it should in this sort of shot, the building competes for attention.




  
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May 25, 2010 14:28 |  #3

Thanks for the feedback. I will take that into consideration as I continue to do more of this!




  
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