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Jun 14, 2010 14:15 |  #1

Original wasn't too hot if I'm honest...

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Here is what I managed to do with it...

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Jun 14, 2010 14:21 |  #2

I like it but you lost a lot of the detail on the doors with your PP.


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Jun 14, 2010 14:29 |  #3

Is this better...?

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Jun 14, 2010 14:40 |  #4

much better looks pretty sick!




  
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Jun 14, 2010 15:22 |  #5

it makes it look not as "flat", nice!


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Jun 14, 2010 16:13 |  #6

Pizdous wrote in post #10360673 (external link)
much better looks pretty sick!

agreed!


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Jun 14, 2010 16:58 |  #7

A lot better.


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Jun 14, 2010 20:47 |  #8

Great capture and pp work.


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Jun 15, 2010 02:05 |  #9

corkneyfonz wrote in post #10362635 (external link)
Great capture and pp work.

Cheers mate :)


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Jun 15, 2010 14:02 |  #10

I like the choice of blue and the last edit is very good. If only the car was more interesting.




  
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Jun 15, 2010 14:04 |  #11

The white balance of the original was way off. The second image just makes the picture more blue.




  
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Jun 15, 2010 14:09 |  #12

Yusef wrote in post #10367175 (external link)
The white balance of the original was way off. The second image just makes the picture more blue.

Obviously.

IMO, changing to blue works for this photo as it adds contrast and depth.




  
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Jun 15, 2010 14:13 as a reply to  @ Yusef's post |  #13

I have to agree with this. You have lost all the details in the car itself?
The composition is sweet.
Tried this, just my take..


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Totally pixelated because of size.but you get the gist...:o

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Jun 15, 2010 14:17 |  #14

I love it but like said before, you lost most of the details on the car.




  
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Jun 15, 2010 17:17 |  #15

I think you should start by correcting your white balance first.

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