palaima wrote in post #10951148
Hi guys, as i can see u've been busy! GReat to know that more people are getting this lens
Hope everything goes well for them, it is a great one
One from recent photoshoot, i still have a feeling in my gut that there is something wrong with it :/ But can't find what.
Either way, enjoy
You don't have enough "breathing" room above his head. And the crop down the bottom is awkward - You chopped his hands off. You could easily fix that by cropping it slightly higher, just below his elbows. It would look more deliberate, then. Also, the pose is a bit stiff and at an odd angle. Next time, maybe have him bring the other side of his body around, just a touch. So it's at more of an angle then just a straight up and down pan.
Other than that, rad photo.