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whitewall

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Oct 03, 2010 17:29 | #1

CC please

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AmandaMarie

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Oct 03, 2010 17:42 | #2

technical CC or composition CC?

if this is a product/commercial shoot, then the model's style is too much. but if this was beauty shoot, then the clothes are too much. i'm not big on the darkening at the bottom of the photo. find it kind of distracting.

i do love the background though.

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Oct 03, 2010 17:49 | #3

Thanks.

Yes the models clothing is a bit too much, that's why the question was more about the picture then the clothes, I don't like the clothes myself....

The shoot was free to a new vintage clothing company, all the clothes are from the 80's. In my opinion vintage is the 20's to 60's. But I'm just the photographer

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Oct 03, 2010 18:05 | #6

seems not too much in focus to me, unless that is the compression.

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Oct 03, 2010 18:21 | #7

The compression and the soft blur we added in PS.

It was a free shoot and my first indoor shoot, I totally messed up a few of the pics (eyes not in focus) and I'm a little annoyed at myself for that, I didn't stop and think!!!

However, I know what I did wrong....

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Oct 03, 2010 18:54 | #8

I think this one is better than the last one you posted. How did ya score that gig in lil ole adelaide ?

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Oct 03, 2010 18:58 | #10

Thanks mate. As soon as you mentioned that eyes thing, I kicked myself. I was rushing and messed up a couple of the pics, so annoyed!! However, I have learnt from my mistake.

How did I get the gig? 10 years of IT Consulting and Business Development helps me when I'm trying to source new business I just knew where to look, have lots more shoots booked in. Looks like I need the practice...

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Oct 03, 2010 18:59 | #11

Hi Amanda

Very tight f2 on the 50mm lens, I wanted to make sure the backdrop was blurry because it is very bright and it would have taken over the pic (even more).

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Oct 03, 2010 19:21 | #12

Well if ya get too much throw some my way

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Oct 03, 2010 19:52 | #13

Will do.

Do you still need some assistance with your wedding in November/December?

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Oct 03, 2010 19:53 | #14

use a higher fstop and bring the model further away from the backdrop if you can.

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Oct 03, 2010 19:54 | #15

Amanda in your opinion did I choose the right fstop?

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