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Oct 31, 2010 18:28 |  #1

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Nov 01, 2010 15:03 |  #2

the rouge finger in the bottom left of the first collage jumps out at me


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Nov 01, 2010 15:07 |  #3

2nd image is well done.

1st image is all over the place. Ditto on the finger/glove in the foreground. And the largest image of her, which is centered, is screened - it takes up the most area, why screen it?




  
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Nov 01, 2010 15:25 |  #4

The first one is just way too busy. No need for 4 shots, especially given that they are all some version of a forward facing portrait in the same outfit.




  
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Nov 01, 2010 17:29 |  #5

gonzogolf wrote in post #11205802 (external link)
The first one is just way too busy. No need for 4 shots, especially given that they are all some version of a forward facing portrait in the same outfit.

Agreed,
In picture #1 try having the shot on the bottom left face inward instead of outward so that the glove isn't awkwardly placed in the picture.
I think it might look better with the glove in the corner. :confused:


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Nov 01, 2010 17:39 |  #6

Thanks I screened that shot to give it DoF in the print. After looking at the finger I notice what you guy are talking about..

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Nov 01, 2010 17:40 as a reply to  @ PhotoTails's post |  #7

Good stuff. A bit different that the usual Senior shot I should say, but it works.;)




  
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