I've been invited into an exhibition about Youth and i'm considering using this image. I love the focus and the intense stare from the eye.
My only concern is are the purple pants just to damned distracting?
What do you think?
Cheers

rhubarbcrumble Member 35 posts Joined Dec 2010 More info | Dec 09, 2010 05:13 | #1 I've been invited into an exhibition about Youth and i'm considering using this image. I love the focus and the intense stare from the eye. ![]()
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Jonta Senior Member ![]() 540 posts Joined Jan 2008 Location: Trondheim, Norway More info | Dec 09, 2010 06:24 | #2 By posing the question, even in the title, you're setting your picture up for people to be distracted by the trousers.
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Jonta Senior Member ![]() 540 posts Joined Jan 2008 Location: Trondheim, Norway More info | Dec 09, 2010 07:13 | #4 Well then; a partial answer would be: If you ask people "Do the trousers distract you?", they'll distract them.
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Benji Goldmember 2,205 posts Likes: 6 Joined Jan 2006 Location: North east Indiana More info | Dec 09, 2010 08:48 | #5 Yes they are distracting as is the red cup, the patterned couch, the corrugated steel background and the junk at camera right rear. I won't even touch the overexposure issue.
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Shockey Goldmember 1,187 posts Joined Jan 2010 Location: Boise Idaho More info | Dec 09, 2010 08:56 | #6 If you have others you are considering, take a closer look at them. ___________
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learncanon Member 177 posts Likes: 5 Joined Jul 2010 More info | Dec 09, 2010 09:38 | #7 I think the purple adds liveliness of youth
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J-RoN Member ![]() 146 posts Joined Dec 2010 Location: St. Mary's, Maryland More info | I don't really mind the purple pants because most of the picture seems to have a purple feel to it, everything is a coldish blue/purple. But, your main point is the eyes in this picture, and I'd have to disagree only because you can only clearly see one eye. If you're looking for that powerful stare, to me, it's kinda hard to get across when only one eye is powerful, and the other is covered with hair and not clearly visible. I definitely like the concept however, I would just see if you have any others that may work better. 60D / Rebel XT / Sigma EX 10-22 / Nifty Fifty / Etc...
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ca7696 Senior Member 679 posts Joined Apr 2005 Location: New Jersey, USA More info | Dec 09, 2010 10:09 | #9 since you mentioned it...yes they are the first thing my eyes were drawn to.
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Flo Gimmie Some Lovin ![]() 44,987 posts Likes: 15 Joined Jul 2007 Location: Nanaimo,B.C. More info | Benji wrote in post #11421955 ![]() Yes they are distracting as is the red cup, the patterned couch, the corrugated steel background and the junk at camera right rear. I won't even touch the overexposure issue. When one studies photography most instructors at some point early in the study will stress the importance of simplicity. Avoid clutter, bright colors, bold patterns, and backgrounds that attract the eyes. Another thing that instructors teach is that anything close to the camera will be large and obtrusive. Benji Agree...and this photo doesn't portray "youth" to me? you're a great friend, but if Zombies chase us, I am tripping you.
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jetcode Cream of the Crop 6,239 posts Likes: 21 Joined Jul 2009 Location: West Marin More info | Dec 09, 2010 11:09 | #11 There are some interesting subtleties in this image. Space on the left, clutter on the right, Dark space on the left, well lit but organized clutter on the right. And who is this cherub who hides behind her cup centered in the frame? The trousers are a nice lead into the cup, the blond mop, and the corrugated backdrop. I think this is a nice image as is. It has a story.
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The Framed Life Goldmember ![]() 1,054 posts Joined Sep 2010 Location: Saskatchewan, Canada More info | Dec 09, 2010 16:08 | #12 ![]() that feels more like "underage drinking" or "college party-goer" to me..especially because those red dixie cups are pretty much the symbol for alcohol at highschool/college parties and for underage drinking. The Framed Life
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Titus213 Cream of the Crop ![]() More info | Dec 09, 2010 19:30 | #13 Welcome to the forum. To answer your question - Yes! Very much so. But distraction from the rest of the image may be a good thing. Dave
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WT21 Goldmember 1,319 posts Joined Feb 2008 More info | Dec 09, 2010 19:41 | #14 You could try selectively desaturating parts of the image, except for what you want focus on. Maybe her eyes and head/hear, and the red cup. 6D: 50, 85, 28-75, 70-210USM, 430EXii.
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