He's getting ready for the presents...
...and I'm ready for your advice! Any feedback or criticism on what I could do better is appreciated
aznative Member 44 posts Joined Oct 2010 Location: Phoenix, AZ More info | Dec 10, 2010 18:11 | #1 He's getting ready for the presents... Canon t2i
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Jonta Senior Member ![]() 540 posts Joined Jan 2008 Location: Trondheim, Norway More info | Dec 11, 2010 08:54 | #2 Hm, only thing I can find is that the bauble in the top right corner is a bit bright and distracting.
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hieu1004 Goldmember ![]() 3,579 posts Likes: 4 Joined Jul 2010 Location: Seattle More info | Dec 11, 2010 10:19 | #3 Just looks like a snapshot of a cute kid opening presents.
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Rimmer Goldmember ![]() 1,416 posts Likes: 4 Joined Nov 2010 More info | Dec 11, 2010 16:25 | #4 I would say that there is just a bit too much tree, and it makes my eyes wander around a bit before settling on the youngster's face. If you crop the top so that just a bit of the string of red beads is included I think it makes a stronger image. Good focus on his eyes. I don't see any problem with colors or saturation, for whatever that's worth. Ace Rimmer -- "What a guy!"
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kyle_4375 Senior Member ![]() 293 posts Joined Aug 2010 Location: Cincinnati, OH More info | Great capture! Eyes are super sharp, colors look good. Cute kid! Canon 50D | Tamron 17-50 | Tamron 70-300 | Nifty Fifty | 430ex | Flickr
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Rimmer Goldmember ![]() 1,416 posts Likes: 4 Joined Nov 2010 More info | Dec 11, 2010 20:52 | #6 kyle_4375 wrote in post #11435440 ![]() ...I also might've created a bit more depth by sitting your son a bit farther away from the tree. Right now, it looks like he's almost sitting underneath it. Oh, yeah! Something kind of bothered me there, but I could quite express it. I definitely agree on that. Ace Rimmer -- "What a guy!"
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Dec 12, 2010 10:09 | #7 Thank you for all the comments! I'm still learning...always learning Canon t2i
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Get down to his level so he isn't looking up at you. The things you do for yourself die with you, the things you do for others live forever.
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Jonta Senior Member ![]() 540 posts Joined Jan 2008 Location: Trondheim, Norway More info | Dec 12, 2010 14:17 | #9 chauncey wrote in post #11439374 ![]() Get down to his level so he isn't looking up at you. Ptheh. Completely depends on what effect you're going for.
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jetcode Cream of the Crop 6,239 posts Likes: 21 Joined Jul 2009 Location: West Marin More info | Dec 12, 2010 14:42 | #10 Personally I think the tree is less important than your son. Look at the entire frame and the relationship the subject (your son) has to this frame. How can you better place the viewers eye on the subject. I leave that for your personal exploration using the crop tool. Play with it until you feel the magic.
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