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Went out shooting with a few friends yesterday. These were a few of my favorites. C&C always appreciated. Thanks.
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Very nice Mag! The only thing I would say is the her face looks a tad orange in the first one, maybe the white balance went a little wonky in that shot? The third one appears to be spot on. Good lighting on all of them - were you using OCF?

Thanks. You're right with the first one. I'll take a look at the white balance. And yeh, OCF was used. Just a YN-465 and a convertible umbrella. Just starting to learn OCF, and having a blast.

Well you are doing a great job with OCF. Have fun and keep it up!

Thanks Nathan!

They look pretty good, except that on my calibrated monitor, they seem a tad dark. Not terribly dark, but just enough. Just my $0.02 worth.

I love the fact she smiles with her braces....not always an easy thing to get them to do....lol

Great shots!

first one is beautiful

These are nicely composed but they seem a bit dark to me as well.

Thanks. I'll definitely look into the darkness issue. How would you suggest I fix it? Lowering the blacks level? Upping exposure a bit?

I love the first shot mag, love that door.

Thanks. Me too Rod.. I think it is quickly becoming one of my favorite spots for photos.

good lightning on the face in the first picture!