Could you C+C this for me, personally I'm happy with the edit but if it can be improved feel free to tell me.
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I like the image, but would like it more if the dead branch were removed. My assumption is that you did a "lighten" vignette, but the lightened corners tend to draw my eye away from the center. I would like to see it again with a "darken" vignette to really know for sure.
Cream of the Crop
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Location: DFW, Texas
Apr 14, 2011 10:08 as a reply to @ Hawk's Feather's post |
I'll echo the above. The vignette has "ghosted" the corners. Also, seems a bit soft to me, but that could be from the compression and/or my work monitor. Composition is good...the minor fixes should really improve the overall image.
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Location: Atlanta, Georgia
I love it.
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Good photo, and good comments. I would have stopped the lens down more to get more of the flower in focus. That would give the shot the appearance of being sharper.
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Joined Jul 2007
Apr 14, 2011 10:58 as a reply to @ MichSt's post |
agree about the corners.no vignette, and it looks like a glamour glow or some other filter was used?
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