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Apr 10, 2011 20:09 |  #1

Im still learning 4 months into photog. My first senior shoot in 1 month :O

need help and C&C on my PP and overall.

let me know whats wrong be mean i like it like that ;]

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Apr 11, 2011 07:02 |  #2

All great shots, really like what you have done :D


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Apr 11, 2011 12:42 |  #3
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These are the worst pictures I have ever seen. I know you like it mean. Just kidding. I like the pictures but the they look like white balance would help, don't know if this is your style.
on 1 would have liked both hands focused.
on 3 better if body was more on an angle, like when trowing a punch.
on 5 clone out the black stick whatever it is
on 6 leave just a little more room by the knees
on 8 should have turned the head a little


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Apr 11, 2011 12:53 |  #4

About the whitebalance, is it bad or just a bit off? too warm? and #3 i dont quite understand ur comment on the tilt ....overall any compositional errors much or just some pp corrections

thanks for ur c&c man! really appreciate it!


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Apr 14, 2011 18:31 |  #5
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They look warm to me. Practice using one of many tools available for white balance.
Check out this link on "tilt of the head". Note the comment at 3.20 minutes.
http://vimeo.com/16401​754 (external link)


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Apr 14, 2011 18:36 |  #6

i kinda overlayed alot of warm colored filters and layers i my PP idk if its my whitebalance


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Apr 14, 2011 21:17 |  #7

I love the pic of the two kids.




  
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