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Apr 15, 2011 21:22 |  #1

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Apr 15, 2011 22:55 |  #2

Is she really there? Weird on her leg outline.


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Apr 16, 2011 02:15 |  #3

Yes she's really there LOL it's probably the effect I used for the pic


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Apr 16, 2011 08:29 |  #4
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Dont like the background color, it's looks blown out and green. Try getting the photo closer in the camera without using pp. It's obvious that you spent a lot of time on this but it was overdone.

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Apr 16, 2011 09:14 |  #5

Way to processed for my taste.


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Apr 16, 2011 10:40 |  #6

Nice model but I would agree that the bg is a tad extraneous.


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Apr 16, 2011 11:27 |  #7

The presentation or rendering here seems too bright on my system. The highlights have little to no detail as a result. I would like to see it darker with more detail in the upper tones.




  
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Apr 16, 2011 11:30 |  #8

Nice model. I'm not feeling the background too much. Makes me think, why would she wear heels to a place like that. Good job though!




  
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Apr 16, 2011 11:39 |  #9

something off about the backgroud like others stated


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Apr 16, 2011 12:03 |  #10

I like it. I'd like the face to show more detail though.




  
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Apr 16, 2011 20:36 |  #11

REALLY looks like you pasted her in or tried to remove what was around her....not in a good way.
Not liking the colours and lacking contrast - a bit flat (the image).
Keep shooting - looks like you have a great model - and some good locations.




  
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