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Apr 15, 2011 13:55 |  #1

This was my first E-session and I would love some C&C and Feedback.

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Apr 15, 2011 14:14 |  #2

#1 you cut off his foot

#2 you cut off the top of his head

#3 excessive chromatic abrasion

#4 excessive chromatic abrasion

#5 cut off hand and chromatic abrasion

#7 cut off hand


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Apr 15, 2011 16:28 |  #3

Great light well done


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Apr 16, 2011 16:10 |  #4

Lots of fun, creative ideas and nice passion. Unfortunately also some hard light, varying WB and the CA in #4 makes it unusable unless you want to try a B&W.


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Apr 18, 2011 08:54 |  #5
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his foot on 1 is chopped.
her arm on 2 looks deformed.
the bush on 3 is overexposed and would prefer wb adjustment
dont like 4
5 could use a better composition but ok
6 the colors are over saturated
7 should have found a better angle (composition)
8 a little busy with the lines and poles but good
Just some feed back, also work on wb for consistancy or take it easy with your colors in pp. A nice day like this the camera usually is good on auto wb


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Apr 18, 2011 11:44 |  #6

i like #2, but agree with the common comment of her arm, I think having her fold her arms behind his neck would address the problem

the pp gives a very magazine like feel image.


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Apr 19, 2011 04:52 |  #7

Thanks for all of the feedback so far. I will definitely look into all of the critiques. This was my first E-session and I know I have a lot to learn.

drumsfield wrote in post #12228918 (external link)
#1 you cut off his foot

#2 you cut off the top of his head

#3 excessive chromatic abrasion

#4 excessive chromatic abrasion

#5 cut off hand and chromatic abrasion

#7 cut off hand

I have to work on reducing the CA. I will have to test the 100mm on the new to me 5Dc.

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Great light well done

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auroraskye wrote in post #12235258 (external link)
Lots of fun, creative ideas and nice passion. Unfortunately also some hard light, varying WB and the CA in #4 makes it unusable unless you want to try a B&W.

It was definitely fun and better than I expected. Due to there time, these pics were taking mid day and I experimented with a OCF for fill.

Crocodile101 wrote in post #12244634 (external link)
his foot on 1 is chopped.
her arm on 2 looks deformed.
the bush on 3 is overexposed and would prefer wb adjustment
dont like 4
5 could use a better composition but ok
6 the colors are over saturated
7 should have found a better angle (composition)
8 a little busy with the lines and poles but good
Just some feed back, also work on wb for consistancy or take it easy with your colors in pp. A nice day like this the camera usually is good on auto wb

I used auto WB, but I did kind of experiment with different PP. This pics were actually taking mid day, and I used a hand help OCF for fill.

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i like #2, but agree with the common comment of her arm, I think having her fold her arms behind his neck would address the problem

the pp gives a very magazine like feel image.

Thanks


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