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My 1st Wedding Critique

 
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Apr 21, 2011 20:16 |  #1

I recently shot my first wedding and im going through the pictures editing them. Before i get ahead of my self how are my edits coming along? Some of the shots there looking at my partner shooting so thats why some there not looking at me.

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I have a lot more but just wanted to see if my edits look good to keep going or if i should start over.



  
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Apr 21, 2011 20:33 |  #2

Can't see any of them.


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Apr 21, 2011 20:58 |  #3

How about now? I have the folder locked on my zenfolio. I think that might be why. But i unlocked it for now.




  
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Apr 21, 2011 21:29 |  #4

They look like some pretty nice shots. The edits are a bit cool and just in the future watch your dappled light. It's not terrible but it is a little distracting. Overall nice though, good focus and clarity.


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Apr 21, 2011 22:31 |  #5

Yea we tried to position them in the shade but it was hard to find a good spot and location. Ill warm them up a bit too now that i look at them




  
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Apr 21, 2011 22:52 |  #6

I like how crisp they are. Focus is pretty spot on also. What did you shoot with?


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Apr 21, 2011 22:54 |  #7

I took them off and redid them with a better (i think) WB lmk what you think. Most was shot with the 5d classic and either the 50mm 1.4 85 1.8 or tamron 28-75 2.8

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Apr 21, 2011 23:02 |  #8

Also heres 2 more

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Should i crop the left side a little bit?

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Apr 21, 2011 23:07 |  #9

Yeah, I would crop it.


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Apr 21, 2011 23:19 |  #10

1. Cute shot. If you posed this, I would recommend having him kiss her on the cheek, this is more of a romantic shot (I thought he may be the groom).

2. Looks good, but a TAD bit bright for me.

3. WB really changed. Either keep them cooler or warmer, but dont mix it.

4. I get what you were going for here, but it doesnt work for me. This works better when you have something more concrete to focus on. For example, having them stand a little bit apart and holding hands. This almost looks like you took a mistake shot.

5. Splotchy light and a bit cool. I would have them a little higher in the frame too I think.

6. Splotchy light and cool, but I am digging this. Have her relax her are a bit more, and pull the veil over her shoulder. This will thin her out a bit and make it a much more relaxed portrait.

7. In moments like these, I like to be looking from the grooms side to the brides side. Her reaction is great, his is not.

8. A bit cool, she looks tense, and they are quite centered.

9. A crop might help, but their kissy-face throws me. I like the veil over her shoulder, but still with those flowers.

10. I wouldnt include this. Really strange crop, bride looks heavy, just not a flattering example of the bride or your composition skills.

Most of these points are just me being nit-picky, and the images arent at all bad, but there is some stuff you can do to improve them.


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Apr 22, 2011 10:05 |  #11

Ok thank you for your help. Hows this one instead of #9

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And how is this for a change for #2 i made it match #3 but made it a little warmer?

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Apr 22, 2011 10:34 |  #12

I really like the moments you captured with the bride & FOB int he first 3. Not much I can add to the good suggestions you've gotten already.


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Apr 22, 2011 10:55 |  #13

Wow, for a minute there I was thinking he was a little old for her.


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Apr 22, 2011 11:55 |  #14

Thx guys and lol yea that's the father




  
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Apr 22, 2011 12:46 |  #15

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Wow, for a minute there I was thinking he was a little old for her.

LMFAO my thoughts exactly!!!



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