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Jul 10, 2011 01:47 |  #1

Love to get some feedback from you all. I really love this forum so I want to learn from the best and the rest. We are like a brotherhood of art! 2 pics, one b&w.

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IMAGE: http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6135/5920947984_db554eb612_b.jpg


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IMAGE: http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6030/5920947544_ea684f3723_b.jpg

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IMAGE: http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6023/5920384159_5d1d66ec00_b.jpg



  
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Jul 10, 2011 07:57 |  #2

and one more for the set here.

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Jul 10, 2011 09:31 |  #3

I like the first pp seems a little too much, last one the leg looks like it wastn't hers. Same with the other could you pull back a little.


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Jul 10, 2011 10:39 |  #4

Her pose in #2/3 is making her face look fatter with her head pulled back toward her neck. Pushing her head away from her body helps make a person look slimmer.




  
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Jul 10, 2011 10:43 as a reply to  @ HappySnapper90's post |  #5

The poses are all looking so forced? I really like the last one had it not been for the huge leg by her head and even the hand wrapped around the post looks like it belongs to somone else.:confused:
You need to work at composition with her, she has to follow your lead, you being the photographer.
If you have another session with her, het her to change up her expression every so often as well.


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Jul 10, 2011 11:42 as a reply to  @ Flo's post |  #6

Not to mention limbs cropped in bad locations...


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Jul 10, 2011 11:43 |  #7

I actually like # 1 but I'm sorry that I have to say the other three are terrible and not really keepers. My advice to you is to be more selective and you'll do fine.

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