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fireworks C&C Please.

 
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Jul 06, 2011 18:06 |  #1

Photo taken from the Harbour at Mamaroneck,N.Y.
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3. Flag in the middle with no border.
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Jul 07, 2011 08:00 |  #2

The effect is very cool, but I kinda like the original better.
Nice shot!


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Jul 07, 2011 09:59 |  #3

Very nice. The first one looks like a postcard.




  
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Jul 07, 2011 10:11 |  #4

I think the flag bleeding out from the edges of the picture detracts from it IMHO!


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Jul 07, 2011 16:49 |  #5

Kechar wrote in post #12718179 (external link)
The effect is very cool, but I kinda like the original better.
Nice shot!

I agree with you when comparing the original picture side by side the original look's better, but the second one with the flag in the firework has a unique twist to it that nobody has. Thanks for the comment.


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Jul 07, 2011 16:51 |  #6

elio79 wrote in post #12718775 (external link)
Very nice. The first one looks like a postcard.

Thanks for the compliment's I'm flattered I will submit the picture to Getty.:D


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Jul 07, 2011 19:51 |  #7

Kechar wrote in post #12718841 (external link)
I think the flag bleeding out from the edges of the picture detracts from it IMHO!

I agree....it looks pretty bad. The idea is interesting, but the border and the bleed ruins the image.


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Jul 07, 2011 20:46 |  #8

Woolburr wrote in post #12721850 (external link)
I agree....it looks pretty bad. The idea is interesting, but the border and the bleed ruins the image.

I totally agree with you looking at it closely looks bad. thanks


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Jul 07, 2011 21:02 |  #9

4. Same Picture without the flag in the middle or the bleeding from the flag.

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Jul 08, 2011 04:28 |  #10

JayPee wrote in post #12722073 (external link)
I totally agree with you looking at it closely looks bad. thanks

What looked bad was the border.....the flag in the fireworks was fine and a very interesting idea.


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Jul 08, 2011 08:26 |  #11

Try putting the flag back, but remove the entire white border!


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Jul 08, 2011 11:23 as a reply to  @ Kechar's post |  #12

I like it!




  
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Jul 08, 2011 19:16 |  #13

mccormack wrote in post #12725096 (external link)
I like it!

Thanks!


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Jul 08, 2011 19:19 |  #14

Kechar wrote in post #12724217 (external link)
Try putting the flag back, but remove the entire white border!

Here ya go on picture #3. Thanks for the wonderfull C&C.


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Jul 10, 2011 09:36 |  #15

The stars and stripes is great!


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