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Aug 26, 2011 10:19 as a reply to  @ post 13000636 |  #16

Given the nature of the shot, I like it. Sure we can nit-pick the image to death, but that's not the point. My only real critique would be to add some fill to the right (camera left) side of his face with a reflector. If the image captures his character, then, I say, you've done what you set out to do.


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Aug 26, 2011 11:08 |  #17

I like it a lot.




  
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Aug 26, 2011 17:52 |  #18

Love the B&W treatment. Shadows on camera left side of his face is a little much to me - maybe a reflector to open them up would have helped the color version.


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Aug 27, 2011 08:51 |  #19

asysin2leads wrote in post #13003372 (external link)
Given the nature of the shot, I like it. Sure we can nit-pick the image to death, but that's not the point. My only real critique would be to add some fill to the right (camera left) side of his face with a reflector. If the image captures his character, then, I say, you've done what you set out to do.

Thanx for your input.

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I like it a lot.

I'm glad you like it.

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Love the B&W treatment. Shadows on camera left side of his face is a little much to me - maybe a reflector to open them up would have helped the color version.

Thanks for taking the time to reply. I like the B&W idea that Gene came up with also.


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Aug 27, 2011 10:53 |  #20

I like it. You did a good job making pose natural. Right amount of light, I kind like the darker contrast to the left of the face. Gives more character to the photo. I would clone out the yellow thing above the shoulder. Keeper.




  
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Aug 27, 2011 11:40 |  #21

Great job! I would do selective color filter in PS and bring down the reds on the face (quick mask), but keep the warm tones. I also really like how you got catchlights in both eyes. A picture that tells a story about this man. Wall hanger for sure.




  
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Aug 29, 2011 07:41 |  #22

ycp wrote in post #13008708 (external link)
I like it. You did a good job making pose natural. Right amount of light, I kind like the darker contrast to the left of the face. Gives more character to the photo. I would clone out the yellow thing above the shoulder. Keeper.

Thanks for commenting.
I like the contrast also.
I'll do some clean up when I spend time on PPing.

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Great job! I would do selective color filter in PS and bring down the reds on the face (quick mask), but keep the warm tones. I also really like how you got catchlights in both eyes. A picture that tells a story about this man. Wall hanger for sure.

Thank you.
Catch lights are one of the things that can make or break a portrait.
The color wasn't something I was happy with, it's the reason I wanted to get comments on pose, lighting etc. This needs PPing.


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