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First Wedding - C&C please.

 
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Aug 29, 2011 14:37 |  #1

Posted a few weeks back about how my first wedding went
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Anyway the B&G got to see the photos today and thankfully they were absolutely delighted with them. I had asked a neighbour, who happens to be a wedding photographer, for some advice and he said 'keep it simple'. So that is what I did. I know these aren't perfect but any comments, good or bad, would be greatly appreciated.

1 - The bride absolutely loved this one.

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Aug 29, 2011 15:11 |  #2

Look good to me, well done!


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Aug 30, 2011 06:54 |  #3

Many thanks Darryl


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Aug 30, 2011 12:33 |  #4

The last one bothers me because of the sinking couch cushion... the way it is lifting on the egde and then sinking in the middle makes it really unflattering to her, and gives off the impression of being much more overweight than she actually is (not to mention the pose and angle giving the impression of a double chin). If it was me taking the photo, I probably wouldn't have noticed it as I was shooting either, however on screen, it just makes the photo off.


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Aug 30, 2011 12:38 |  #5

The one where they're holding hands by the cake and she has what appears to be a knife in her hand is a bit bothersome. Mostly because of the dark shadow on the left side of the frame (Her right arm). Set up on that one was botched a bit but. I agree on the that last one too. Not a nice pose for her. But as far as the rest are concerned, Not bad for your first wedding!


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Aug 30, 2011 13:50 |  #6

Many thanks for all the comments and critiques. To be honest I never even noticed the cushion while taking it or even looking at it later lol, but point taken.

The one where they're holding hands by the cake and she has what appears to be a knife in her hand is a bit bothersome. Mostly because of the dark shadow on the left side of the frame (Her right arm). Set up on that one was botched a bit but.

Hope it was just the shadow that bothers you and not the fact that she has a knife in her hand as it was one of the 'cutting of the cake' shots :)


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Aug 30, 2011 13:57 |  #7

Hmmm. It looks like they're just holding hands. i see the cake that they're supposedly cutting but in this shot it just looks like they're holding hands.


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Aug 30, 2011 14:01 |  #8

Fair enough, I can see what your saying - I didn't see it like that as I knew the knife was there lol. Looks like I still have a lot to learn :) They didn't want an album, just photos on a disk, but I did put them together a small photobook and this is how the cake section looked - hopefully that photo looks better when seen in context.

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Aug 30, 2011 14:09 |  #9

In context with the other cake photos I think it works. To me it looked like they were doing a hand pose but they probably will remember that you were getting a photo of them cutting the cake.


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Aug 30, 2011 14:10 |  #10

No worries :) As I said I have a lot to learn and thanks for the comments :)


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Aug 30, 2011 20:54 |  #11

No problem. If you don't mind me asking, who are you using to do your books?


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