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Sep 09, 2011 16:45 |  #1

how did I do on these, don't hold back.....

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Sep 09, 2011 16:54 |  #2

I think the flash needs to come back toward the camera...the light diffrence between her eyes is too much...her left eye is just too dark




  
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Sep 09, 2011 16:56 |  #3

both are natural light only.....w/reflector




  
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Sep 09, 2011 17:13 |  #4

shows what a "newbie" I am...just think a little more light on the other eye would be better




  
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Sep 09, 2011 17:27 |  #5

i like both pictures =D your editing is kind of like mine... atleast that's what i think...




  
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Sep 09, 2011 17:52 |  #6

The tone of the wood seems to have affected her skin tone in #1 (that or its just plain too warm.) Also, if you wanted, you could have her step away from the background more to get a more bokeh effect (if that's what you're after.)

You could lighten up the other side of her face in #2, but its by no means awfully underexposed. Nice and sharp, eyes are well captured in both. Good work.


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Sep 09, 2011 17:59 |  #7

Thx yeah gold reflector in #1, I've decided that I going to use that less in the future as it effects skin tones to much




  
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Sep 09, 2011 23:36 |  #8

Gold does mess with the skin tones greatly. I'm not sure if you played around with the first picture in a black and white, but I think it looks just as lovely. :)

Of course, yours would look much less pixel-ated.


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Sep 11, 2011 00:40 |  #9

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Sep 11, 2011 01:21 |  #10

first pic, I don't know anyone that looks like that, wb off and details lost in darks

second pic, much better


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Sep 11, 2011 18:37 |  #11

I like these. B&W looks better imo


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